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Nothingness

Nothingness Where is nothingness? Past our universe? Beyond beyond...past the end of stardust? No more galactic matter to disperse? Nothingness...end of ends? No, deeper thrust towards light and heaven...if in God we trust. Sandra M. Haight ~NA~ Contest: Nothingness Sponsor: Julia Ward Judged: 05/08/2016 English Quintain: Rhyme Scheme a b a b b
Rules: "Write a poignant poem about nothingness of things, or the nothingness of one named thing, but keep it short - FIVE lines, please. The LAST line should be uplifting, so refer away from things, or the named thing, to the contrast of matters spiritual."

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Date: 5/4/2016 9:22:00 PM
This form is new to me but you have said something really thought provoking! The last line is the absolute truth of where "nothingness" actually lies! The best to you Sandra in this contest! :-) Thank You for your kind words!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/5/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Walter. I am so pleased that you found my poem 'thought provoking'. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Sandra

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