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Nothing Seems To Last Another Collaboration With Eileen and me

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This Is a Tanka written by Eileen Manassain and reimagined by me by adding every other verse in order to create Lyrics we could put to music. please visit Eileen recent page and enjoy This poem in it's original Form. I want to Thank Eileen for the privilege of working with her on these poems Nothing seems to last The present now the past flowers weep faded petals Like flaking paint or rusty metal A faint scent lingers Upon the barren tips of fingers once blooming in bright color Now appear quite smothered My poems have lost their appeal No longer things seem real emotions wither And darkness comes hither Wilted words whirl in the wind Until they blow my way again bereft of beauty Void of duty I strive to remain rooted In a world so polluted hoping for droplets of love Droplets from above

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Date: 7/13/2025 1:59:00 PM
wow Jerry what an amazing collaboration with Eileen, you are both so gifted! I love the way the verses flow so seamlessly with your additional lines and the music and singing is superb. YOU ROCK!!!! hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2025 8:04:00 AM
I'm so glad you posted this!!! I really love it so much. Your added lines give it beauty. You are so kind. These songs are giving life to my mundane existence. Big hugs. PS...I uploaded the I Miss You Song.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/13/2025 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, you are so kind, I like this song also. Your words inspired the rest of the lyrics. I'm glad you were able to upload, I was thinking about all day as to how I could explain it without it being confusing. God bless

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