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Nothing Seems Real

The annual spring carnival's in town, and my five senses are in for a treat. For it is much more than rides and a clown, this extravaganza is hard to beat. Flamboyant colors hypnotize my eyes, flaunting fantasies that seem surreal. And to top it off, I could win a prize, or some cash on the crown and anchor wheel. It smells of peanuts and cotton candy, amidst a cacophony of loud bells. And the whole spectacle is jimdandy, I can taste the flavors each vendor sells. The rawhide feel of pitching a baseball adds to the tactile sensations I feel. And the noisy crowds are part of it all, lost in the fervor, for nothing seems real. Painted tents bloom like flowers in the spring, popping up as soon as winter snows melt. They're a traditional seasonal thing that precedes summer, north of the Sunbelt. (Quatrain) 8/2/2018
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Coulstock Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 9:24 AM
The way you have written this Emile has excited my senses and I am there at the carnival with you.Love it thank you.
Pinet Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Thanks Sylvial, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Deo Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 11:05 PM
u did not have to say "Kids recall the thrills of another world" coming to town. Innocent pleasures ... before there was an entertainment industry and DISNEY COMES CALLING. the senses do get a treat as u set up the tents and rides. Thanks Emile
Pinet Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Anil, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Hopper Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Love this so much!
Pinet Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Wonderful, Emile. It's like being there.
Pinet Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate all of your support my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Well written, fun poem Emile! :)
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Blown Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:31 AM
"...it is much more...for nothing seems real..." nice seasoning
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Sand, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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