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Nothing More To Say

It was October, our anniversary, almost to the day. I packed up half of our life in my car and drove away. A lifetime of memories, all running through my mind. Looking for something but not sure what I would find. It didn't matter who was right, who was wrong. Now more than ever, I needed to be strong. Little did I know of the circumstances ahead of me. The difficult turn of events, that I didn't foresee. Two different people, we became that day. All that there once was between us, we decided to betray. Watching what was left of us disintegrate, crumble and fall. Wondering what happened, how did we loose it all? Wasn't it enough to know that this was breaking my heart? Did you want to push me too far, so you could watch me fall apart? I will never understand why you orchestrated our destruction this way But, you did sadly, there is...nothing more to say.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/4/2018 9:59:00 PM
Sandra.. this is a great couplet write!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/4/2018 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, LM, I think this is my most comfortable form of writing. Glad I made it a good one. My best
Date: 7/4/2018 9:55:00 PM
Sandra, what you have conveyed, has been felt and seen through the eyes of many, including myself. I feel the emotion my dear friend...Well written! Hugs // Charlie
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Date: 7/4/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie, happy to hear from you. It always amazes me that something that I write can allow a reader to experience the same emotion. The desired outcome. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
Date: 7/4/2018 9:19:00 AM
Sandy, you weave your words in such a way that the reader feels the emotion. Very nicely written my friend. John
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/4/2018 10:42:00 AM
Thank you John. My writing is simplistic, I want readers to understand what I am trying to convey, and to feel the impact of the emotion within it. I am glad that you feel it, that's what this is all about.
Date: 7/4/2018 7:10:00 AM
Wow. Beautifully penned, Sandra. A very touching and impactful write.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/4/2018 10:35:00 AM
I love it when a comment starts out with WOW! Thank you, Line for reading this, and your gracious comment.

Book: Shattered Sighs