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Nothing More Than Why

Alone with a feeling of emptiness briefly filled by lovers passing they share crumbs of loneliness and hungry passion a gray world of unmade beds and sadness where no one listens words flow to fill vacant ravaged eyes for various reasons everyone yearns for empathy's hand to grasp a warm and tender smile without a price where love is nothing more than empty pockets from a cave of bats rushing into the cool air of night their flickering tongues nourished by the sympathy of victims I've asked nothing more than why cry out... I'm here no one answers but the lonely who use emotion for their own needs I lay behind clouded windows and feel the sun rise and fall on fulfilled laughter, I hear in the distance where no one sees me I've become a shadow on a wall...that has no eyes left alone with a feeling of emptiness 7/16/17

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Date: 7/16/2017 3:15:00 PM
This is such a powerful poem Frederic. Just stunning with deep expression that can explain how many people feel at times I am sure! Excellent :)
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Date: 7/16/2017 2:49:00 PM
gentle as the night that embraces this lovely poem of longing... sigh, frederick.. huggs
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Date: 7/16/2017 1:57:00 PM
Excellent title! Superb images, Frederic!
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Date: 7/16/2017 12:22:00 PM
This is touching poem, full of emotion. The ending is perfect, and I know many have felt like that. Empty, alone. An excellent write.
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Date: 7/16/2017 11:42:00 AM
You've chosen some heart-rending phrases to describe the emptiness of such a person. Full of questions that no one answers, a shadow on the wall. Exceptionally well written, Frederic.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/16/2017 11:48:00 AM
Your exploration could be journal entries. They're all very realistic.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/16/2017 11:46:00 AM
thank you, Lin, I just wanted to explore such a person

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