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It's a lovely quiet evening Enjoying rhyme and reasoning A mouse on a broom Darts across the room With all our cheese and seasoning AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on May 19, 2019

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Date: 5/23/2019 6:44:00 PM
The title of this poem caught my eye this evening. I thought, "Oh, no! Venezuela! (There are mice there too, I suppose). :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 7:19:00 PM
LOL I appreciate your visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 5/20/2019 11:11:00 PM
You created for us a wonderful snapshot of a beautiful moment, thank you :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 7:19:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 5/19/2019 9:20:00 PM
Cuteness personified! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 9:53:00 PM
LOL thanks , Gershon.
Date: 5/19/2019 2:44:00 PM
Love the lightness and humor! Panagiota
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/19/2019 2:35:00 PM
Haha brilliant! Way to ruin a self-indulgently artistic evening, Mr Mouse! Great limerick!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 3:54:00 PM
LOL Thanks, Nina.
Date: 5/19/2019 2:25:00 PM
what a fun poem its not at all cheesy lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. That is a wonderful compliment. Limericks are touchy.
Date: 5/19/2019 2:07:00 PM
Wow, that must have been a very big mouse to have put a smile on my face Line, Aloha wk
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William Kekaula
Date: 5/19/2019 11:50:00 PM
Possible, some are so big, --I mistake them for cats???
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 2:31:00 PM
Do you even have mice in Hawaii, William? I could mail you a few. LOL
Date: 5/19/2019 1:57:00 PM
Ah, Line, this is fantastic! What a terrific imaginative little tale in poetry form! Bravo!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 2:32:00 PM
LOL from the queen of whimsy, that is a nice compliment, Caren.