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Nothing Left To Eat

It's a lovely quiet evening Enjoying rhyme and reasoning A mouse on a broom Darts across the room With all our cheese and seasoning AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on May 19, 2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/23/2019 6:44:00 PM

The title of this poem caught my eye this evening. I thought, "Oh, no! Venezuela! (There are mice there too, I suppose). :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 7:19:00 PM

LOL I appreciate your visit and comment, Gershon.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/20/2019 11:11:00 PM

You created for us a wonderful snapshot of a beautiful moment, thank you :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 7:19:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/19/2019 9:20:00 PM

Cuteness personified! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 9:53:00 PM

LOL thanks , Gershon.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/19/2019 2:44:00 PM

Love the lightness and humor! Panagiota

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 3:53:00 PM

Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/19/2019 2:25:00 PM

what a fun poem its not at all cheesy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 2:31:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. That is a wonderful compliment. Limericks are touchy.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/19/2019 2:07:00 PM

Wow, that must have been a very big mouse to have put a smile on my face Line, Aloha wk

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/19/2019 11:50:00 PM

Possible, some are so big, --I mistake them for cats???

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 2:31:00 PM

Do you even have mice in Hawaii, William? I could mail you a few. LOL

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/19/2019 1:57:00 PM

Ah, Line, this is fantastic! What a terrific imaginative little tale in poetry form! Bravo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2019 2:32:00 PM

LOL from the queen of whimsy, that is a nice compliment, Caren.