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Nothing Left To Eat

It's a lovely quiet evening
Enjoying rhyme and reasoning
A mouse on a broom
Darts across the room
With all our cheese and seasoning



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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May 23, 2019 at 6:44 PM

The title of this poem caught my eye this evening. I thought, "Oh, no! Venezuela! (There are mice there too, I suppose). :) gw

May 23, 2019 at 7:19 PM

LOL I appreciate your visit and comment, Gershon.

Timothy Mcguire

May 20, 2019 at 11:11 PM

You created for us a wonderful snapshot of a beautiful moment, thank you :)

May 23, 2019 at 7:19 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

May 19, 2019 at 9:20 PM

Cuteness personified! :) gw

May 19, 2019 at 9:53 PM

LOL thanks , Gershon.

Panagiota Romios

May 19, 2019 at 2:44 PM

Love the lightness and humor! Panagiota

May 19, 2019 at 3:53 PM

Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

May 19, 2019 at 2:25 PM

what a fun poem its not at all cheesy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

May 19, 2019 at 2:31 PM

Thanks, Jan. That is a wonderful compliment. Limericks are touchy.

William Kelii Kekaula

May 19, 2019 at 2:07 PM

Wow, that must have been a very big mouse to have put a smile on my face Line, Aloha wk

William Kelii Kekaula

May 19, 2019 at 11:50 PM

Possible, some are so big, --I mistake them for cats???

May 19, 2019 at 2:31 PM

Do you even have mice in Hawaii, William? I could mail you a few. LOL

Caren Krutsinger

May 19, 2019 at 1:57 PM

Ah, Line, this is fantastic! What a terrific imaginative little tale in poetry form! Bravo!

May 19, 2019 at 2:32 PM

LOL from the queen of whimsy, that is a nice compliment, Caren.

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