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Nothing Gold Stays

Who can resist the strangulating grip of time? That which exists today may not be there tomorrow Like shooting stars which vanish in the flicker of an eye Life comes and goes quicker than a darting arrow The only constant in life is its inconstancy With time, even our existence turns a myth As every sunrise follows a sundown, Each birth leads to an eventual death In the fluidity of time, we are in a state of flux So don’t obdurately hold anything in your arms Instead loosen your grip and let things go With the ease of water through your open palms Every lovely flower that blossoms once Fades in time and eventually turns to brown Even a leaf that clings tenaciously to the tree When autumn blasts strike, falls down Impermanence being in the grand design of things To nothing in this world, one can permanently cling So, willingly give way to herald in the new, As autumn leaves cannot be laundered for the spring! Feb.22.2023 ~ Placed Second~ Inspired by Robert Frost’s ‘Nothing Gold can Stay’ Poetry Contest Sponsor JCB. Brul

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Date: 3/1/2023 8:15:00 AM
An outstanding wisdom-filled poem my dear friend Valsa! Another fave of mine from you. Big Congrats on your great win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings always and your golden pen. Hugs
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Date: 2/28/2023 6:51:00 AM
This is brilliant. My placing may not give justice to this poem but it is still a masterpiece.Congratulations.
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Date: 2/26/2023 9:16:00 PM
a superb and beautiful poem penned on the theme of Nothing Gold Can Stay by Frost; great to read; congrats for the placement
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Date: 2/26/2023 7:19:00 PM
Just love that last line!! Indeed, the laundry you mention has yet to be invented, and never will be, I imagine...
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Date: 2/26/2023 9:09:00 AM
Phooy! I forgot to congratulate. Your poem is strong, yet lovely. You say so many beautifully things we may wish not to be true.Congratulations on First!
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Date: 2/26/2023 9:05:00 AM
Your poem is just lovely, Valsa! "...with time, even our existence turns a myth"
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Date: 2/25/2023 5:48:00 AM
Absolute love this, To my favourites. Harry
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Date: 2/25/2023 3:53:00 AM
Absolutely perfect! Brilliant write. You get a FAVE from me. "In the fluidity of time, we are in a state of flux So don’t obdurately hold anything in your arms Instead loosen your grip and let things go With the ease of water through your open palms" -- You give meaning to Keats "My name was writ on water...". To Poe, "Can I not grasp one with a tighter grasp?...is all we see and seem, but a dream within a dream" -- Outstanding poetry you write. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2/24/2023 8:00:00 AM
And when the Chief Shepherd appears, you will receive the crown of glory that will never fade away. 1 Peter 5:4 NIV In that day people will throw away to the moles and bats their idols of silver and idols of gold, which they made to worship. Isaiah 2:20 NIV Love your poem : ). May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance
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Date: 2/24/2023 4:28:00 AM
Valsa, your beautiful poem is so very full of wisdom ! I totally relate to your words though it is difficult at times, we have no choice! Great write and I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Happy Friday xxoo
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:29:00 AM
Loved the last line. We just had Ash Wednesday to be reminded that dust we were, dust we'll become. Great poem, dear Valsa.
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Date: 2/23/2023 10:16:00 AM
Your poem, which is so true to reality, adds depth to the concept that "nothing gold can stay." No one or object can ever truly have the truth in its grasp. The changing of the seasons and the forging of new relationships both have their attractive aspects. Good advice, infused with your own style, pours through in your poetry, Valsa. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/23/2023 6:14:00 AM
To nothing in this world, one can permanently cling…truth. Still there is beauty in every new season and in new friendships too!
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Date: 2/23/2023 6:01:00 AM
Your poem enhances the meaning of nothing gold can stay--so true to real life. You aced the contest theme, Valsa. A sure win for you.
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Date: 2/23/2023 1:42:00 AM
There's a magical quality to this one. Lifting up the veil and seeing clearly - I enjoyed it
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Date: 2/23/2023 12:38:00 AM
Even we fade with the passage of time and we just have to accept it. Well written Valsa and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/22/2023 11:45:00 PM
Great advice in your poem, Valsa, that shines with your unique touch:) awesome last line:)
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