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Notes From a Neglected Piano

You used to lovingly coax my keys with your melodies flirt and tease so playfully high-note hitting glee We enjoyed taking tunes apart upside down inside out syncopated Beethoven bobbidy-boo beats No small feat with shimmy and shake boogie, blues jazz and all the razzmatazz I could take late nights wide awake You kept me in good company playing wild playing loud fiercely proud of the sounds we would make all our own But something eventually changed and our songs became sad and few, in shades of blue slowly fading out Dreary now mahogany dull no longer loved, cared for forlorn, faded wallflower voicelessly, I grieve ____ Another Shadorma form/ personification poem... What I *wish* my old piano thought of me. In truth, I think the 'old girl' is RELIEVED not to be bothered by me anymore!! (Music is sadly not one of my talents.)

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Date: 3/26/2020 9:12:00 PM
So, my best guess is that you are more talented musically than you say (judging by the "bobbidy boo beats" you mention). Even if you don't think so, maybe with encouragement you'll get back to tickling the keys. Its so soothing. I know because I am truly bad (not being modest) but still enjoy trying to play. You've got some real creative talent. Let 'er shine.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 3/28/2020 1:29:00 PM
Aawww, thanks for the vote of confidence... but yes, I am really that bad! (I just liked the sound of "bobbidy boo beats"!) :D But, you're right- it's still fun to try to play even when the overall effect is pretty awful. ;) Thanks for the reminder... I think we all need some type of soothing diversion about now!
Date: 4/12/2019 1:10:00 PM
So lonely and evocative, eloquently nostalgic, gracefully penned!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 4/12/2019 11:26:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle- what a lovely compliment!! ;)
Date: 3/30/2019 4:44:00 AM
In a way I feel your past is calling you to revive something musical, creative, or wonderful that you have forgotten you used to love to do. Maybe it is not playing the piano, but your muse is alive, and well, and ready to play, and I am so thankful you have written and posted new poems this week, my friend. She is too! This is a darling missive indeed.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 3/30/2019 11:28:00 PM
Yes, you definitely got my mood from this piece... My muse is bouncing off the walls trying to get me doing SOMETHING (ANYTHING) creative right now! I tried to play, but I'm definitely not in a music mode (if I ever was)... so I guess I'll just keep writing! ;)

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