Notebook

Notebook, my dearest old friend from the past, I know you feel abandoned and disgraced; Times drastically changed and progressed fast, I traded crafted notes for databased. Convenient and prompt, with click and scroll, Personal handwriting now obsolete. I am ashamed to tell you -“select all”, Then paste and writing mission is complete. Do you remember calligraphic pain I endured with unwilling, awkward hand?! With letters dancing backwards, seemed in vain - You were the only one, who’d understand. I made mistakes, you laughed, you didn’t fret, I rubbed you the wrong way, that was in style, I even spilled and got you soaking wet - You turned another page with a dry smile. I miss those days when over you at night I confided my secrets into you, And shared my happy moments with delight, When stubborn words did not comply, I drew. I note with pride what a great book you’ve been! But please let’s keep between us what you’ve seen! March 21, 2023 Sponsor: Constance La France Contest: Notebook
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La France Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Margarita, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'N' Words, wonderful writing, blessings, Constance
George Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 12:16 AM
Congratulations on your first place win.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 11:30 AM
- A notebook can contain many small/big secrets ... a wonderful poem, Margarite :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 12:45 PM
It does, not it’s in iCloud:) Thank you!
Peck Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 9:48 AM
A wonderful poem, Margarita, your rhymes smoothly flowing. I love the line: you turned another page with a dry smile. Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you, Anne. Soaking wet and dry, I like it too;)
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 9:50 PM
"I note with pride what a great book you’ve been! But please let’s keep between us what you’ve seen!" - A very personal note to the notebook. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Thank you Alex!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:56 PM
A fun write/ending. I still like/use a notebook. Good Luck. Have a great day  as you write away..............
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Thank you Paula!
Hind Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 10:46 AM
This is so cute.! I loved it.
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 12:47 PM
Thanks Paige!
Daniel Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 3:59 AM
Awesome, love the pun in the last two lines:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 10:45 AM
Thank you, I love puns, I’d pun every word if I could :)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:35 PM
A fabulous story/poem of the notebook Margarita, the last two lines are brilliant… Belle
Lillico  Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Belle!
Wolf Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Precious nostalgia here, Margarita... and quite a finishing punch to boot... I miss my notebooks too, but they say that you can't go back. And they're right. :) gw
Lillico  Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:46 PM
No back, it’s up in iCloud now;)
Turner Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 4:39 PM
Sounds like maybe you should renew an old friendship. A treasured keepsake for sure. Easily identifiable and extremely well written. I hope to see it in the winner's circle. Good luck, Maggie.
Lillico  Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 4:52 PM
Thank you!
Bueckert Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 2:52 PM
What a sweet tribute, mine is collecting a bit of dust as well, loved your last couplet, nicely done
Lillico  Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 3:11 PM
:) keep it though dusty, I couldn’t find mine, must have ducked into the hard drive Thank you!
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