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04/03/25

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Contest by Brian Strand

a note I wrote in wind to rewind reminiscences rippling on lost love of bygone days like shimmering sunray in dim twilight with faded light as evening merging to night to carry my last wish to meet you just to exchange glances and with regards to put a complaint how can you discard that part of life which once we spent together also to ask how to forget that fact ~ you once loved me and also had won my heart

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Date: 4/3/2025 10:48:00 AM
Well written. I can feel this. :)
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