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Note Found In An Ancient Oak-Nw

I sat beneath the ancient oak in my back yard, grieving and in sorrow at the age of twelve. My best friend, Jessie, was moving far away. I didn't think I'd ever see him again, so, I wrote a note to tell him what was in my heart. I filled the page with memories through the years, of our laughter, our fears, and things I'd never said. I didn't sign my name but folded it with great care. A swift Autumn breeze flew away with my note. I chased it until it was far beyond my reach. Now Jessie would never know my love was real. I didn't tell him in case it would embarrass him and because he may not feel the same way. If that was so, I'd rather not know. No word from Jessie in the five years he'd been gone. It was my Senior year, and soon I'd be off to college... a new beginning, but memories of him lingered. After classes on the first day, I found a note in my locker. Someone had slipped it through a crack under the door. It was written in my handwriting, five years ago. I turned when someone tapped my shoulder. Jessie! He'd changed, but not his beautiful eyes. I couldn't find the words to express what I felt. Tongue tied with disbelief, but Jessie's smile put me at ease. They'd just moved back to town, a few blocks away. Yesterday, he'd helped his dad trim an old oak tree and found something lodged in its branches... squirreled away like an acorn in a hidden hole. It was yellowed with age, its edges ragged, so very carefully he opened it to read the words I thought he would never see. We stood there, ogling each other before I asked, "How do you know I wrote this to you?" In a voice so deep it made me blink, he replied, "No one else scribbled little drawings like those. I remember lots of things from back then, most of them are about you." October 29, 2022 A Note in the Wind Contest Sponsored by Charlie Messina

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Date: 11/2/2022 5:24:00 AM
So beautifully written, Jenna. Your pen always reflects golden speckles dear friend. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Blessings...Charlie
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Date: 10/31/2022 10:47:00 AM
Jenna, such a sweet and delightful story, wonderfully penned!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/2/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thanks, Tania.
Date: 10/31/2022 5:16:00 AM
Jenna, I'm in love with this story! It is so beautiful and crafted so very well!! It brought a tear to my romantic eye!!! I hope it's true!! Happy Monday!!! (and Halloween!) xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/31/2022 5:26:00 AM
Nay, Mike. The truth of it lies only in my romantic eye. Thank you for being so gracious with your comments.
Date: 10/29/2022 5:06:00 PM
A tale dear poet? perhaps some truth is woven from the threads of life...nicely done Jenna...good luck my poetic friend
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/29/2022 5:10:00 PM
Purely a tale of fiction in this one. Thanks for your kind thoughts, sweet friend.
Date: 10/29/2022 11:45:00 AM
Reads like a fairytale Jenna, great storytelling, fate had decided that they would be together. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/29/2022 12:01:00 PM
One with a happy ending, Tom. Thank you.
Date: 10/29/2022 11:40:00 AM
Aw, so touching, Jenna. This little story brought a tear to my eye, and I'm so glad you shared it with us. It was a bright spot after reading so many ghoulish poems about Halloween! Best of luck in Charlie's contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/29/2022 12:01:00 PM
If it were a movie, it'd be a chick flick, but I'm glad you were touched by its sentiment. Thank you, Milt.
Date: 10/29/2022 10:18:00 AM
Nice one, Jenna - a good little tale
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/29/2022 10:21:00 AM
Rather Hallmarkish, except for the kiss. ;) Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts.

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