Not Writin a Poem Tonight

I'm not writin a poem tonight
no, the words just won't come.

Count the minutes since we parted ways   
even though I know you know
only been a couple days..

No, I'm not writin a poem 
my ears so sore from strings
of a mask worn all day
while I worked.

But, just so you know
if I was gonna write 
I'd leave out the part about the mask
just write about the wonder
in all moments 
we shared.  

Wish the words would come
countin those long minutes 
'til you're in my arms again 
now that would be somethin'.
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Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 12:26 PM
awww ~ so sweet
Thomas Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Are you sure you didn't write a poem that night Richard? :) Hope you've been well ~Flo
Harris Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 3:23 PM
While virtually browsing (scrolling) thru poems linked to you, who invisibly (albeit electronically) follows me, I too often wish a whoosh of creativity would flow at my command.
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 8:07 AM
That’s what they say to do……write that you can’t write……so glad the mask thing is dying out……stay strong. SuZ
Shaw Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 4:12 PM
Such sorrow, Zorro, who likes to wear a mask, does Lolita know who you are under that disguise, why not just rip it off, and give her one big surprise . . . ; )
Gasun Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 5:37 AM
Not writing a poem tonight but your muse doesn't want to go on strike and so here's your awesome write. I enjoyed reading your poem tonight dear Richard. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 12:23 PM
A creative/wonderful write. Glad you put your words down for all to read. Have a blessed day............
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Sore words and mask…
Sands Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 5:06 AM
Not wanting to write a poem, understandably tired of masks and yet you wrote this great poem. Well done Richard :)
Agustin Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 11:40 PM
"Not writin a poem tonight..." nonetheless, you did anyway... inspiring many. Thanks for sharing this, and for your uplifting comments I earnestly appreciate. God bless you.
Faulkner Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 8:18 PM
I like the tongue-in-cheek feel of 'I'm not writing a poem tonight' - then of course putting together something that seems simple but has more layers of longing than it would appear, glad to read it, even if it's not a poem :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 6:41 PM
now that was sure different. Sorry you have to wear that mask. I thank the Lord it's not required where i live.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:38 AM
It is sad we must wear masks all day. My daughter gets a rash on her pretty face from wearing hers. Love helps to heal and gives one something to look forward to. Blessings xxoo
Pandit Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 5:10 AM
Keep the dream alive. Enjoyed the vibes, Richard.
Theraven Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Vijay, Thanks for that. I loved reading your latest poem 'Hope' this morning. 'Hope is a Lotus flower ~ Drowning in the night ~ Yet, rising through mud' You have a gift in describing details beautifully. The presence found in the highest mountain, to the smallest leaf falling forever on a gentle breeze. Glad to find this one. Hope you have a nice day friend. -Richard
Hawkins Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 8:05 PM
That's somethin indeed!
Theraven Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 8:16 PM
Shirley, Thanks. Just a little tired of wearin masks, never tired of a heart worn on my sleeve. -Richard
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