Not This Night... Couplet of Faith.

I feel the sordid tug of old temptations,
in the sounds of every wayward station.

The glint and click of foaming glasses,
Wild eyes expand at undressed lasses.

The forlorn fervor of :" just once more."
crouched, snickering in each grimy door.

The dirty dramas, too soon played out,
in morning squints and snarling shouts.

The rancid carpets, disheveled rooms,
foster empty chests with pallid gloom.

Lift up your head and watch the clock,
for your soul will soon be in the dock.

Recall little things like aunts and prayers,
Recite one, then two, say them in layers.

He'll forge iron will against the neon lights,
He'll say:"No!" for me. Not me this night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 13, 2010 at 9:33 AM
A reminder that God will see us past the temptations. Congratulations on placing fourth in Michael's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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May 13, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Congrats are in order Gerard my friend on your winning poem in the Couplet of Faith contest by Michael.. a wonderful and inspirational write and terrific win for u to enjoy today..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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April 4, 2010 at 9:08 PM
Very interesting, Gerard. Sounds like some guy in Vegas or something and nowhere else to go to avoid the temptations. I just see these places and feel the evil permeating them and I want nothing to do with it. If you ever want to soup mail me which were my three footles you liked best, I'd appreciate it for future reference. Well, I really enjoyed THIS poem. I don't know how I ever missed it becuase I've seen most of your current ones, I believe and this is one of my favorites of that group!
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March 11, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Well done! could feel the ambiance.
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March 3, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Hey Gerard, Everyone can find some inspiration here. Thank you for your comments on my poems. I've asked Audrey to leave these comments on my behalf...... Jimmy
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March 2, 2010 at 12:15 PM
I wish you the best in Michael's contest should you enter it with this poem Gerard. Love, Carol
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March 1, 2010 at 5:45 PM
It takes a strong man to resist the temptations, Gerard. I think MJ will like this one. Good luck in the contest! Love, carolyn
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March 1, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Good couplet rhyme. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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