Not So Merrily

NOT SO MERRILY

in evening light, the tree not so merrily —
its shades shut tight, in revelry, lids beating

the coal cache — the portly man, delivering
tongues grab and stow curses repeatedly

astride of hohoho — his sleigh weighty
held back by slick-haired elves stampeding

faux-fur falls suffocating — snowfall heaving
calving forth a cacophonous sleet-piercing scream

an ivory finger placed on pinched lips, ominously
tells the wee little sinners to quit impeding

the work of her white-bearded spouse, seething
and thus competing they run from Mrs. Claus

12/22/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 2:50 PM
- Everything does not have to be perfect :) - Great written, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 2:53 PM
So true! A lesson learned over time! Blessings sweet Anne-Lise!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Your right it is not so merrily. Have a nice day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Just being a little silly with this one :) Thanks Darlene! kim
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