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Not Just a Game

I proudly take my position To obliterate their existence We’ve turned a blind eye to this sickness Poisoned brains to excel in the art of target practice on the guilty and innocent Allowing young minds to participate in these fatalities While shielding them from the harsh realities of true reality Ignorance sold in variety, gamers won’t admit defeat Repetitive images replayed in thoughts are now practiced in the streets Not taught to think, just pull the trigger and watch him virtually sleep Sending a violent message that reads, “It’s okay to be.” Parental guidance: a proposal quietly suggested in vain Until the day that we realize these are NOT just video games

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2016 12:54:00 AM
Givonne Johnson, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:53:00 AM
Givonne, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD
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Date: 1/19/2013 2:02:00 PM
Thank you all. I really enjoy writing poetry and hope to participate in many more competitions.
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Date: 1/18/2013 12:29:00 PM
You've said it all, Givonne...we still don't realize that they are not just video games. Congratulations on a well deserved Ist Place win. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/18/2013 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your grand win friend Givonne. Very awesome write. cheers!! :)
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Date: 1/18/2013 9:07:00 AM
I agree whole heartedly with this message! Hooray for you!
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your super finish in this challenging contest over a controversial subject! RAY
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:11:00 AM
So very true! Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:03:00 AM
Well said! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/18/2013 4:10:00 AM
Really love the truth expressed here and the message to parents. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/18/2013 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations Givonne, a well deserved win here. xx
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Date: 1/5/2013 4:02:00 PM
Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:52:00 PM
hello to you both and happy holidays
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Date: 12/21/2012 11:00:00 AM
Hi there Givonne and welcome to the soup xx
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Date: 12/21/2012 7:33:00 AM
hello.happy holidays
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