Not Enough Time

Last January, winter lost it's chill
By May the summer's sun had turned me brown
I watch the leaves late August, change at will
Time's speeding up or am I slowing down?

It brings to mind, a boy, which I once knew
While young, he put a dream up on a shelf
It sat there many years. Oh, how time flew.
While he got sidetracked searching for himself

And then one day while sitting in a swing
His body tired, each passing year a mile
With autumn closing in, he thought of spring
And how time turned his dream into a smile

How quickly through the glass our trickling sand
One day a boy, the next, a tired old man.


     by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 1:17 PM
These lines echo thoughts which often trickle through my mind, Danny. Age plays so many tricks on us as we pass from one stage of life to another. Alas...Tempus fugit! Regards, my friend. // paul
Turner Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 1:45 PM
Indeed and much too quickly. Thank you for the visit, Paul. It seems to me, as I look back, I always had intentions to do other things which interested me but life always got in the way. A day here, a week there, before you know it you have run out of time for procrastination. Asi es la vida:)
Wolf Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 9:34 PM
As Luke Bryant croons: the days are long; the years are short … Wonderful write, Daniel! ~ Gershon
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Such a beautiful poem full of wisdom, Daniel! Sorry I haven't visited lately ... been in my man-cave bat lab Fortress of Solitude ... lol! Love this endearing poem very much. Halo glow poetry, my dear friend. Instant fave too. Love and smiles always.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Hello Daniel, yes Daniel we all grow up whether we want to or not. have a nice day my friend.
Sands Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations for being in the best new poem list DT :)
Shines Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Just beautifully written and enjoyed every word of your poem.have a great time :)
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 1:33 PM
This is so good Danny...its gone in a blink of an eye....a fave...Soo-Ee
Kannan Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Wow... This is so lovely,Daniel... Lovely sonnet perfect rhymes ,great flow and powerful message... I enjoyed it thoroughly...
Barden Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 12:46 AM
This is just exquisite, my friend, and it is going to my favs. I love it on every level, and that's a very hard thing to accomplish these days, and stay fresh at the same time. I hope you are well ... I haven't seen you "around" and I'm praying you're OK ... please drop a note when you can. Blessings, Buddy! ~ The Bard
Canerdy Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:10 AM
So moving, Daniel--the first poem I've faved in weeks! Your sonnets are truly excellent. Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Stunning piece Daniel. A perfect poem in my books, well, at least in my faves file ;) xomo!
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 6:44 AM
We just turn around and it’s gone, hit the nail with this one DT. Well done old friend...
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Time passes so quickly, but we don't realize that truth until we are older. You have written a beautiful sonnet with a precious message for our youth Daniel. I can relate! : )
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Oh, Daniel, your superb sonnet vibrates with the vivid truth of getting older.. I have that feeling too, that there's just 'not enough time'. I just love your awesome line; 'Time's speeding up or am I slowing down'.. I think for me it's both, and I want to speed up again and slow Time down.. like it used to be .. when I was young.. We're kindred spirits and I love your soulful poem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Hey Danny great sonnet, I think we all can relate to it!
Green Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Sounds like me, especially the tired part. Nicely done Daniel.
Sands Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:20 AM
A perfect Sonnet DT. Time certainly flies. Nice to see your poetry today :) Hope all is well :)
Warrior Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Daniel...welcome back old bud...and you brought a superb sonnet with you I see...hope everything is alright my friend...love & light...^WW^
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