Not Bright

The ad said this flashlight is “BRIGHT”!
So I bought it for my campsite!
   On the beach it's turned on
   But ... the “brightness” is gone
Maybe it’s better at … night?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Laurie Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 4:24 PM
G’day Jack … thankyou. Your limerick had me chuckling indeed - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 3:42 PM
lol great fun:-) hugs jan xx
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