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Not Asleep

Picking up where we left off among the stains and stable troughs my hand becomes 
a path into my veins
And if I manage to shake off this dredge in which I walked across the longest bridge 
and toppled off like rain
But saints and saintly sinners cracking smiles and pointing fingers washing stains 
from the windows painted red
Will try but quickly failing, to stay awake I'm sailing out this waking nightmare aching 
twitching bed
My shadow has a name and a stately white horse figure clutch me closely breathe 
your gold inside of me
For if I fall profusely, make sure to not refuse me one more wisping float atop the 
sparkling sea
And all the times I scream and shout inside my head not coming out my mouth the 
way it crawled across my eyes
And every time that I want out each door beside me spewing grout reminds me that 
this hallways' a disguise
So lying here my belly aches grinding false bicuspids shake my head falls off and 
rolls under this bed
Leaning sideways looking round I notice that this filthy ground is no more less or 
more than what's been said
So everything is every thing and all the things are everything and everything but 
nothing will delude
And so my time spent rummaging in other's rooms beneath their feet they never 
woke and here I must conclude

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Ian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:45:00 AM
Lovely use of language. Thank you.
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:40:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Ian
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Ian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 4:20:00 AM
Congrats Ian on your featured poem this week on PS... an amazing piece to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:23:00 AM
Good descriptive work !Enjoyed--kashinath
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:39:00 AM
Very creative and expressive write on Not Asleep, Ian
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:49:00 AM
Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here.
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