Jenish Somadas Poet Tail-rhyme

Not An Ear To Be Read

I laid my head in an ocean of heather,
Drinking panorama of silent weather,
Life still ahead.

When swarthy sky sent the messengers of night,
My lost time started grappling with dreams in fight,
Left miles to tread.

Down the bed of heather, resting in timeless world,
Echoes of silent words, yet to be uttered swirled,
Not an ear to be read.


Third Place in Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by charles messina

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Aditi Mishra July 7, 2020 at 4:45 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Jenish. Keep writing and inspiring :) Jenish Somadas July 7, 2020 at 5:51 AM Thank you Aditi..

Supraja Kannan June 15, 2020 at 12:24 PM Lovely imagery and so beautifully penned... Great work, Jenish Jenish Somadas July 4, 2020 at 9:07 AM Thank you Supraja..

Gershon Wolf June 11, 2020 at 10:45 AM So beautifully penned. (Soup mail please). Thanks, Gershon Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:37 AM Gershon.. my dear friend, you are so kind.. A Poetic hug..

Aditi Mishra June 11, 2020 at 9:27 AM What a lovely soothing imagery! I could picture myself resting on that bed of heather drinking panorama of silent weather. This is a musical composition for me. Love to read it over and over. A fave! Best wishes for the contest and blessings :) Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:37 AM Thank you for the 'fave' Aditi.. They are few to get and when got, I will put it in my heart.. Thank you..

Jan Allison June 11, 2020 at 9:01 AM what lovely imagery I adore seeing the heather and gorse on our daily walks - all I'd need would be a blanket of stars:-) charming poem Jenish, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:35 AM Thank you Jan.. I'm delighted to know, you like it..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 11, 2020 at 4:10 AM Serenity in this ocean of heather makes the soul ascend to heavens dearest, Jenish. Such tremendous writing my friend. Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:34 AM Thank you Demetrios.. Your words are inspirations for my pen..