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Not Alone

I played every game determined to succeed But when we were done playing, I didn't win Yet, I continue to cherish happy feelings For someone out there was cheering for me. When I fell down, I tried my best to get up And I don't remember sending a distress-signal. When ambulance arrived, I smiled with a glee For someone out there was thinking of me. As I continue to anguish in a chronic illness I never thought of asking for anybody's help, But when I received flowers, I felt good again For someone out there holds on to my name. I let myself down when I heard my own cry, I never said a prayer as I continued to defy Until church bells rang and I started to kneel For someone out there has been praying for me. December 6, 2017 Placed 3rd..best free verse Oct -Dec 2017 by John Hamilton HM: Strand Pick C contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/9/2018 10:59:00 AM
so beautiful dear Vijay! Your words always amaze me...:) congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful, Vijay. Well deserved win.
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Date: 1/6/2018 9:01:00 AM
A very good write Vijay, congrats on another win!
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Date: 12/14/2017 7:50:00 AM
A strong write Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you James.
Date: 12/7/2017 6:35:00 PM
Very powerful message here. Great write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2017 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 12/7/2017 3:44:00 PM
I’m glad happy thoughts follow you on your path. I add blessings on your journey.
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Date: 12/7/2017 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Richard--appreciate your thoughts--this is fiction.
Date: 12/7/2017 10:55:00 AM
Vijay a well written poem about playing the game of life. Winning has as many definitions as the number of players. You did win just not what you expected. Well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Patricia--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/7/2017 8:58:00 AM
What a lovely and powerful message, Vijay. Well done !!!
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Date: 12/7/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Mike--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/7/2017 8:47:00 AM
Wow Vijay this is so good, yes its not about the winning, but how one reacts when one has lost the game.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2017 11:25:00 AM
Many thanks Harry...appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/7/2017 6:14:00 AM
Now this is one of your best writes, we can't always win and when we don't it can be a spiral of emotions.. excellent write..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Silent One--appreciate your support.
Date: 12/6/2017 7:23:00 PM
Wow..we all need that someone, and we need to give thanks for our blessings too....Beautiful write Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2017 6:24:00 AM
Appreciate your comments--thank you Joseph.
Date: 12/6/2017 7:13:00 PM
A beautiful thing Vijay, a comforting thought to hold on to that someone is always there watching out for us. An inspirational poem indeed ...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/7/2017 6:24:00 AM
Many thanks Maria--appreciate your comments!
Date: 12/6/2017 3:27:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem with such an important and inspiring message. I hope ALL can feel this way in their lives. That someone is there for them.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 4:57:00 PM
You make a great point Andrea--I share your sentiments--many thanks!
Date: 12/6/2017 11:22:00 AM
Awe Vijay, this touched my heart for you. For sure someone out there is watching over you. Beautiful! Hugs and smiles :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 12:03:00 PM
This is fiction--but thanks for the caring thoughts, Akkina.
Date: 12/6/2017 10:36:00 AM
A warm and glowing pen Vijay, a wonderful message :) xomo!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Maureen--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/6/2017 10:19:00 AM
This is one very wise poem, Vijay. Your spiritual knowledge shines like a lighthouse beacon of hope. Ty for sharing such sage words w/us here at PSoup. We are all blessed by your pen presence. Astounding poetry ... so elevating, so enlightening. Love and joy always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 11:07:00 AM
Many thanks Freddie--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/6/2017 8:27:00 AM
Unimaginable prayers are being said every second...in fact in every breath we take...All the best Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Arturo--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/6/2017 8:18:00 AM
- Many feel loneliness ... especially in the Christmas season - Thank you for this beautiful poem today, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 9:30:00 AM
Many thanks Anne-Lise--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/6/2017 7:01:00 AM
This is beautiful Vijay! An inspiring write for anyone who feels alone.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 8:11:00 AM
Appreciate your thoughts Judy--thank you!
Date: 12/6/2017 6:35:00 AM
Very nice Vijay and a comfort to know you are watched over. Well written with a good message :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/6/2017 6:59:00 AM
This is fiction--thank you Heidi--appreciate your comments!

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