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Not Alone

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Like block shaped wheels our lives stumble at the chapters we write Corners seem dark and teeming with doubt, alleyways call in echoes of our name, as if tempting us to crawl when we cannot walk “Fear begins the parade at our fragile hearts” Shades are drawn and slotted with eyes watching, voices ring the halls of the buildings looming large, rumors of pointed fingers find our ears in colander fashion, dripping fear at our feet “Waves conduct sound, crashing vividly as we hear” We cry, hoping these tears will somehow wash the pain, fill the gutters and move out to sea, casting waves upon unsuspecting shores “Wishes…more waste than want…at least of these eyes” When of the shadows a touch, softly at first, then strong upon our shoulders fall… comfort leaps to our hearts in sing song praise, wishes become goals and finish line adventures “What is this light, soft yet sure, found within” We are not alone, darkness hints at light and butterflies fill our air with prism’d colors and soft breezes collecting on our damp cheeks and drying the aftermath of our understanding of reality “Dreams of these nightmares fade into happiness” We find footprints in the dirt…two which are not our own, closely, yet affectionately following our way and bringing direction to our dreams, yet the nightmares still flourish but we do not feel so alone “Fences built may keep us in yet… may keep us out” For this hand, from a distance, climbing mountains and fording rivers leads our hearts to the safety of love just beyond the bricked wall, the ivy covered monolith, the chain link disaster which once stood locked “Finding that a breath may exhale peace…again” Now stands open an arbor of hibiscus blooms and teapot pourings fore our eyes, open and hopeful of the coming truth once lost beyond our dreams…and we breathe for it feels right to breathe while standing in the darkness…not alone ”True friendship will always find us and comfort us in the darkness”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/7/2019 4:47:00 PM
I don't know what we would do without a few friends in our lives, I have enjoyed your poem, the heart reveals so much when taken to pen, thank you for sharing and thank you for dropping in . xo
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much. True friends are treasures.
Date: 11/7/2019 4:36:00 PM
A epic Chris. Extremely deep - 'fences built may keep us in yet..may keep us out' is very poignant. This is different but you have raised the bar. Straight into my Faves. Didn't realise you are a musician - me too back in the day. Best...Ron :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I dabble in music a little bit. I am happy you liked this long winded piece and I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 11/7/2019 3:37:00 PM
OMG Chris. This is one of your best poems and I have been reading your poems for years!! This is just amazing! A favorite for me. I love the line comfort leaps to our hearts in sing song praise! This is really special :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, your wonderful comment has made my day. Thank you so very much.
Date: 11/7/2019 3:34:00 PM
Feelings felt deep in the soul, Chris, you have said what I meant to say in my very short poem, "In Deep Dejection" , but I am so down in darkness I didn't know how to put them down on paper like you have. It does help my mood to write it down.Your a true master of writing. Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much Eve. You have always been so kind to me and this is no exception. I appreciate you my friend and I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/7/2019 1:26:00 PM
This is one of your more complex poems Chris, so you're a poet, writer, deep thinker/ philosopher,musician and all around great human. A great offering we have on our hands...a great beginning with meaty portions throughout, and a delicious happy ending dessert! Very satisfying...yummm!
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/7/2019 2:19:00 PM
Yeah I did the same with my latest post, hardly a nibble!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 2:07:00 PM
I don't know about all of that but I appreciate you saying so. The site has seemed a bit lacking the past few days so I thought why not post something deep and see if anyone reads it or likes it. I am glad you did my friend. Thank you so much.
Date: 11/7/2019 1:04:00 PM
Very powerful and well crafted poem I think we all need the strength of friends to pull us from shadows that loom and feel hopeless at times ... your soul shines yet again in this piece. You are an amazing person and poet my friend ... I love this. Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 2:05:00 PM
My friend, thank you always for the kindness you show and the friendship you share with me. Your thoughts on my poetry always encourage me to write more, to write better and be a better person. I appreciate Sandy, so very much.
Date: 11/7/2019 12:24:00 PM
great opening line..just brings to mind a life where each step is a hard-knock until breaking point is reached. Everyone has one but true friends can keep that threshold from being reached sooner rather than later. Ok, I just watched Joker yesterday and it's rather ironic, that in an overpopulated world, true friends are rare but then who has the time these days to dig deeper into easily ruffled feathers or turn a chain link disaster to an hibiscus arbor sans a grudge? Loved that transition :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2019 2:03:00 PM
Thank you so very much Susan. A little deeper than I usually post but I figured, why not. I appreciate your kind words today and I am thrilled this one spoke to you. You have made posting this worthwhile for me.

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