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Not All Is Lost

Shadows expand until daylight is gone, swallowing visible beams like a yawn. Fervently reaching like a greedy hand, until daylight is gone, shadows expand. Leaf piles increase in the hiss of brisk wind. Meager gardens sag, verdant assets thinned. A howling gust uplifts each drifting piece. In the hiss of brisk wind, leaf piles increase. Coldness compounds like a dampened shawl worn. Snowman's weather-braved cloak I now adorn. The numbing of an ice compress surrounds. Like a dampened shawl worn, coldness compounds. Thorns remain as fragrant petals lose scent, hardened in a hunkered state of lament. Not all is lost in bitter frost and rain. As fragrant petals lose scent, thorns remain. 9-5-2022

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Date: 1/24/2023 7:09:00 PM
Juliet this is a wonderful swap quatrain! It flows so smoothly which is often not the case with these that I read. That final stanza is poetic perfection madam!
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Date: 10/9/2022 10:21:00 AM
How beautiful in its emotion … I traveled through your words experiencing each nuance . I felt the chill and change of seasons . Wonderful! All the best in the contest , Susan :)
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:26:00 PM
This qualifies for the 'Thornbirds' Poem of the Year, methinks. Haunting verse, Juliet. Ooh. Winter is upon me...
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:06:00 AM
An excellent swap quatrain, the rhymes all flow smoothly, and lovely imagery of fall turning to winter, best wishes for the contest
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Date: 9/10/2022 1:07:00 AM
Wow what an awesome poem with artistic imagery crafted in wonderful rhyming. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 9/5/2022 10:37:00 PM
What a superb write! Good luck in the contest, Juliet
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