Not All Is Lost

Shadows expand until daylight is gone,
swallowing visible beams like a yawn.
Fervently reaching like a greedy hand,
until daylight is gone, shadows expand.

Leaf piles increase in the hiss of brisk wind.
Meager gardens sag, verdant assets thinned.
A howling gust uplifts each drifting piece.
In the hiss of brisk wind, leaf piles increase.

Coldness compounds like a dampened shawl worn.
Snowman's weathered cloak I mutely adorn.
The numbing of an ice compress surrounds. 
Like a dampened shawl worn, coldness compounds.

Thorns remain as fragrant petals lose scent,
hardened in a hunkered state of lament.
Not all is lost in bitter frost and rain.
As fragrant petals lose scent, thorns remain.

9-5-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Thomas Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Juliet this is a wonderful swap quatrain! It flows so smoothly which is often not the case with these that I read. That final stanza is poetic perfection madam!
Lawrence Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 10:21 AM
How beautiful in its emotion … I traveled through your words experiencing each nuance . I felt the chill and change of seasons . Wonderful! All the best in the contest , Susan :)
Wolf Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:26 PM
This qualifies for the 'Thornbirds' Poem of the Year, methinks. Haunting verse, Juliet. Ooh. Winter is upon me...
Faulkner Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:06 AM
An excellent swap quatrain, the rhymes all flow smoothly, and lovely imagery of fall turning to winter, best wishes for the contest
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 1:07 AM
Wow what an awesome poem with artistic imagery crafted in wonderful rhyming. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Seeker Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 10:37 PM
What a superb write! Good luck in the contest, Juliet
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