Not a Man

Tell me
I'm not a man.

Up against this 
charred forest,
compelled along
its path.

Handed these levers,
these weights, these
high-stakes appraisals.

Delivered this beaten,
broken mired work,
these floundering hopes.

Living with my chiseled
consequences
and
fast turn-around
confrontations.

Captured in someone's climate
of conquest.

Clad in this breathless
armor of control,
a frenzy of packaged
   identity
like someone's remedies
for whom I am.

Tell me
I'm not a man
along this tree-lined
midnight.

Lift this metal suit
that I may find my
way back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Your muse is on fire! "Living with my chiseled consequences and fast turn-around confrontations." I have no words to add that would add enough.
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