Not a Bunny,He Is a Tiger

that frigidly cold new year
I was the sole bread earner
with a seriously sick husband
watery soup was all for dinner  

it was time for Easter
and spring break at school
my just-turned-teenager wanted to help
some extra bucks, he said, would be cool

he donned a bunny costume
white with pink ears and belly
outside the store where I worked
he stood waving to all in winds, so chilly

him handing candy to little kids
I watched proudly from the window
posing for a picture when asked
my dauntless little hero

as we walked home that evening
I saw a man in his eyes that shone
might've been a bunny to all but
I was walking my tiger home.

Written on:07/25/2016
Contest:'Walking my tiger home' by David Lindsay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Babbit Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Congrats, what sentiment.
Gupta Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 5:21 AM
A beautiful poem ... Congratulations on your win ...
Haight Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 3:52 PM
I really like the way you worked in the theme, Sara! Well-done, and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:35 PM
A great take on the theme, Sara, congratulations! Viv x
Murray Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Nothing like a mother's pride. Both with you and in the wild Sara.
Scars Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Sara, this is so cute! I have a white fluffy bunny in my house and he is so cute :) well done and congrats on your placement lady :)-luloo
Garcia Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:14 PM
I didn't get the same motherly lump in the throat Jan did but I still recognize a fabulous write when I see one - well done on this!
Chansarkar Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Haha,thanks Philip!
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Aww Sara I got a lump in my throat reading this - fabulous take on the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 12:11 PM
thanks a lot Jan!Haven't read yours yet,I'm sure it will be unique like always!
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