Nostalgia

Pleasant remembrance, a true resemblance- Nothing compares to your dark luminescence. I can reminisce in delight and still see the night- I can recall your smiles, but so filled with fright. I believe that all dark memories come with light- and with each passing moment I no longer have sight. Nostalgia is but a sentimental flashback- We long for the moments we figuratively lack. Craving for the white to return from the black- and in the middle of the cement a crooked crack. But when I think of you I don’t feel the adoration- I sense the circumstances of intimate separation. I think of all the loveliness God put in your creation- yet you acted impulsively without alleviation. Remembering your temper with a red-hot flare- Not knowing if you really knew we all did care. I’d look into your red eyes and all I’d see a blank stare- all the days and nights filled with fear and prayer. This time of year, I start to feel uncomfortable in remorse- Your moods were such an unrecognizable force. All the days of your life thrown off your direct course- I feel if it were today, my deep love I would reinforce. Nostalgia is nothing but a sentimental thought- But at times regret fills with the wars we fought. Oh, how I remember all the hope in you I sought- but I feel the only thing nostalgia brought… -was a lesson in the present that should’ve been taught. November 26, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/2/2016 11:21:00 AM
Everything that they said!
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Date: 11/30/2016 10:15:00 PM
You simply write beautifully, Laura:) congratulations on your top win :) can't see you around much:( are you very busy??
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Date: 11/29/2016 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this nostalgic write.
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Date: 11/29/2016 8:44:00 AM
Congrats Laura on the placement with this wonderful piece!
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:46:00 PM
Very good poem, Laura , you just described my dad when growing up.. congratulations on your write.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/28/2016 4:48:00 PM
Hi Luloo, I just wanted to stop by and say hello... I hope you're doing well. I like this poem, how you've mixed regret into the nostalgia ... it's a powerful poem. Well done. Hugs
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Date: 11/28/2016 3:25:00 PM
Many congrats on your win LuLoo I especially love the final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2016 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on the first placement of the contest.
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Date: 11/26/2016 6:54:00 PM
ohh, despite the nostalgic feel, this is an enchanting read, lou... wonderful!..huggs
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