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Normandy Now

Velcro shod man lingers in the V.A. clinic for yet another visit; he slowly turns pages, reading pictures. Withered man peeking from beneath bushy eyebrows laying odds on another day at the park: stooping to stop the ball a kid just threw curved into the wheelchair. Sitting his old bowed head white and sparse of hair a tired head, tired of waiting to finish the landing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/15/2008 12:33:00 PM
I have friends who go to our VA hospital, Vietnam vets. That old man is respected by all. This was a touching write. Vince
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Date: 10/14/2008 3:20:00 AM
This is a very sad poem and it made me think of the song Streets of London. There's a line that goes like this: In this winter city/the rain cries a little pity/For one more forgotten hero/And a world that doesn't care. And thank you for your comment on my poem! ;)
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Date: 10/7/2008 12:42:00 PM
Sue what a sad picture but so true I used to see these men when my father was in the VA hospital where he passed away there. A sad place with cold hallways! Excellent write!!!! Laura :(
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Date: 10/6/2008 4:40:00 PM
The vivid picture drawn by so affectively using the language shakens the readers to realize what is eventually going to happen to them. This is the beauty of your write. I quote below my translation of Josh Malihabadi's Quatrain: I was in the glare of lights one day And love was at its height one day It is now an object of disgusted looks The face that was Kaaba of sights one day. Thanks for your tribute to my featured poem The Musician. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/6/2008 2:26:00 PM
Time passes so quickly. Guess this is what happens to all of us, if we are lucky enough to make it. (lucky?) But for a forgotten hero, this just seems all too wrong. Yes, you paint a very sad and lonely picture. Well expressed Sue. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/6/2008 1:04:00 PM
A vivid picture of one of our forgotten heroes. A wonderful, yet sad poem....Beautifully written. ~ Carrie
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