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How creeps the dark where life was brightly lit when he who once mighty is idly damned - to watch destroyed an energy and wit makes concealed and sad a life long and grand. Where the acquisitions of yesteryear become a puzzle piece and not a whole, where atrophy on each new day impair the bravest heart! The old sense! The lost soul! I have seen the inconsolable grace and pride which inherit the living haze - that robs identity without a trace kept more sedentary in mortal malaise. When my time draws nigh I pray of the twain that body and mind this soul still remain. Written: April 2005

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Date: 3/21/2023 6:47:00 PM
How very sad when a veil of darkness conceals a mind. Your description of it as "a living haze," is appropriate for such a devastating mortal malaise. I pray my mental faculties do not abandon me before my death. Well told, KD!
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