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your love is like a f l o a t i n g lantern one moment it burns so bright, it's so warm.. so warm that people step right in then... once they loosen their grip it grows cold, small, distant.... almost non-existent ~3/18/18~

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Mbongeni Khoza

Date: 4/16/2018 4:48:00 AM

wow!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/15/2018 3:54:00 AM

Thought provoking. Well written. How does one get a grip on love? Who knows, maybe it needs to be a loose touch?Many wishes, Kai

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/11/2018 2:04:00 PM

It is inspiring to see someone at your young age pursue the the great art of poetry. We need more talent like you! Congratulations on your achievements of a top win and reaching the top of the best new poems list. A brilliant endeavour! Aloha, Connie ; )

Pailey Gordon
Date: 4/11/2018 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Connie for your very sweet comment, I started back in only September and I have gotten so much support from this community :) I'm glad you're very supportive of my work ~Hugs~

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/8/2018 7:15:00 PM

WOW!! Stunningly beautiful poetry, Pailey! Congrats on first place... Hugs :)

Pailey Gordon
Date: 4/11/2018 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Akkina for your kind comment!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/8/2018 11:32:00 AM

Well done! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Pailey Gordon
Date: 4/8/2018 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Cay!

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 4/2/2018 5:03:00 PM

Pailey, wow this poem was intense I can see how it got first, the creativity here is out of this world...I look forward to reading more of your work!

Pailey Gordon
Date: 4/3/2018 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Kyle!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2018 1:36:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 1st place on the "Best New Poems" list, Pailey :) - Enjoy Easter :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/27/2018 10:00:00 PM

This is so good Pailey! Congratulations well deserved :) xomo!

Pailey Gordon
Date: 4/8/2018 3:32:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Maureen!

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/27/2018 4:55:00 PM

Brilliant, I love original poetry, a big fave Pailey;-)

Pailey Gordon
Date: 3/27/2018 7:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Keith!

John Hamilton

Date: 3/27/2018 3:28:00 PM

Nice poem Pailey, double congrats are in order I see. You're in 9th grade? This is pretty good for someone so young!

Pailey Gordon
Date: 3/27/2018 7:14:00 PM

Thank you John! Yes, I am in 9th grade and started writing back in September :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/27/2018 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations Pailey! You're #1 on the Best New Poems list! It's no wonder since your poem is so beautiful, enchanting and expressive.. warmest wishes. ~Susan

Pailey Gordon
Date: 3/27/2018 7:15:00 PM

Thank you once again for such a nice comment Susan!!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/23/2018 7:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Pailey - keep up the great work! :-) <3

Pailey Gordon
Date: 3/27/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Gregory!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/22/2018 7:22:00 PM

Wow! Pailey, I love you poem. Its so tender and poignant. Your emotional expression is delicate yet definite and certainly elegant. Loved it and a fav! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/23/2018 1:00:00 PM

Yes Pailey, always believe in your writing - it's beautiful!!

Pailey Gordon
Date: 3/23/2018 12:04:00 PM

Awh! Thank you Susan! This made my day and helps me believe in my writing! -hugs-!