Noise

Hear chattering, chattering, all day long.... Horns honking, sirens blaring.... The pleasure of silence. 3/20/19 Writing challenge 4-Kimo Sp. Dear Heart

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/28/2019 5:23:00 PM

Nothing like silence. It's 'golden,' as they say. Congrats on your win. Best wishes, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2019 5:59:00 PM

GOOD ONE, Barbara. Love it. And Congratulations.

Constance La France

Date: 3/25/2019 2:58:00 PM

Barbara, congratulations on your win in my contest. I know exactly what you mean, there is nothing more blessed at the end of the day than silence ~

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/24/2019 9:59:00 PM

Ain't that the truth!! Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.

Joseph May

Date: 3/24/2019 10:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win Barbara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2019 8:17:00 AM

- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/23/2019 6:17:00 AM

It would be a piercing silence after so much noise...

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2019 4:40:00 AM

We need a break from the noise!...Very nicely done Barbara..

Jack Horne

Date: 3/22/2019 3:34:00 PM

love this kimo - silence is golden

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2019 1:36:00 PM

I like your Kimo, Barbara. The contrast between the first 2 lines and the last one is vividly projected. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2019 4:55:00 AM

- A lovely kimo, Barbara :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/20/2019 11:04:00 PM

What Jan said....how can that saying not be thought about! We don't honk our horns here in Hawaii, only rarely. I go out shopping all the time and I never hear a horn honk. It sure is nice. A lovely Kimo Barbara. : ) xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2019 7:49:00 PM

silence is definitely golden Barbara!:-) hugs Jan xx