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noir scene

She came in out of the cold with a hungry look.
She’d been hunting a bird - the stuff dreams are made of,
with a rich coat of bourbon honey, like newly applied lipstick.

The bird that turned up, a butterball, was in fact murdered.
The signs were all there - decapitation - done by a pro --
ligatures and the corpse was stuffed, like a defendant's bad alibi.

The whole holiday was a crime scene, but there was a gravy, dark as a back alley deal, 
to obscure forensics, and while the witnesses all talked of blessings - like a cult - 
there were knives everywhere.

Motives abounded, like place settings - was that cranberry sauce - or blood? The room had a rich smell - roasted bird, dressing and complicity.
The way everything was being passed around - there was nothing for it.

Someone was going to take the fall - not her - she wasn’t having white meat.  She was hard-boiled and had had it dark - and you know what they say.

In the end, she got what she was looking for - she almost always did. And it tasted like apple-cider-bourbon and family togetherness - her favorite flavors.
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A playlist for this:
daweb.us/xmas/Christmas_19.mp3

=]   Happy Thanksgiving Everyone!  =]
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Fallica Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 4:24 AM
Renowned novelist and novice medical student Anais Vionet, finds a dead dinde at her Grandmere’s estate not even a year after moving to France. She finds her family members consuming the perished poultry and pursues the cause of this macabre incident. It becomes clear that Chef (Julian) was an accessory after the fact. The bird was already dead, and he was just facilitating the family hiding the remains. This is a film the whole family would enjoy and is sure to become a holiday viewing staple.
Vionet Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 9:08 AM
Julian (the snitch) must have said something to Grandmère because last Monday night, at dinner, she discreetly mentioned, “Julian is our chef, it’s his kitchen.” I was chastised, but I get it - he isn’t allowed to do any of my homework. =]
Parker Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 7:34 PM
You know what they say: Happy Thanksgiving, Elfin One. Bless.
Vionet Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Thank you - You too!
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