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Nocturnes of Surrender

You speak, and my spine remembers that I was built to bow. Your breath: a nocturne in C sharp minor— unasked, entering… disarming, following. You lean in like Chopin leaned on silence— possessively, melancholic need before sound—searing hushes that demand submission in return. And I am raindrops to your sustaining notes…. storming into the song’s development— I become the keys, and you the fingers… —you press out sounds of me— architectures, arts, poesy, nocturnes of surrender rising in my throat… into yours.

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Date: 5/12/2025 8:23:00 PM
There is a tablature of your love that can only be played in the perfect warmth of honest heart fire, wherein the gem keys of your kisses confirm the notes of pulse driven inspiration arriving upon the silken strings of our senses with poetic precision, the music living like a velvet texture teaching the skin of soul the meaning of pleasure...this poem is sophisticated sensuality Poetess. You are a passion with no limitations...Justin
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