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Nocturnal

Fond of dusk’s long shadows am I. I’m here right now but I’m hiding. You see me not; I tell you why: Fond of dusk’s long shadows am I. Now see – sun slides down in the sky. My time since morn I’ve been biding. Fond of dusk’s shadows am I. I’m here right now but I’m hiding. Oct. 18, 2020

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Date: 10/29/2020 1:27:00 PM
so pleased to see this was a winner
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Date: 10/22/2020 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win , Andrea , love your imagery in your collaboration poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:22:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea. I enjoy the feelings conjured by the poem, and the great use of repetition.
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Date: 10/21/2020 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:51:00 PM
A great collaborative piece, Andrea!!
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Date: 10/19/2020 8:42:00 PM
very nice as usual, think I may have given the wrong idea about cancer and the virus, was told due to having all that chemo and radiation my immune system was fragile and so be careful about getting the virus. Given the type of rare cancer and stage 3 I made the decision to take the Cancer Kill difficult but used for rare cancers, would not do it again. i can imagine the problems you must have dealt with I hope some of it has dissipated.
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Date: 10/19/2020 7:26:00 PM
Just beautiful! Lovely refrain!
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Date: 10/19/2020 1:08:00 PM
I have no idea what a triolet is, but I am really digging this one, and now I plan to look it up.
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Date: 10/19/2020 10:31:00 AM
Spellbinding images from start to finish! Your comment on my ode poem is something I will always enjoy. I took the risk of choosing that difficult theme and made it, hah!
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Date: 10/19/2020 1:55:00 AM
Unique write for this contest, Andrea, you did well in so few lines:)
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Date: 10/18/2020 11:00:00 PM
Bet we can flush you out somehow. Interesting yake on this contest. ~~
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