Get Your Premium Membership

Nociceptive Nomad

Withering wandering waves of a wasted will The Nomad stands in solace within the silent still Universal laws that lock and securely seal Metaphorical minds that soon rebelliously reveal Lachrymal light years that have gallantly gone Pensive prisons meticulously molding a mortal pawn Methodical madness mocking a soulless vessel Where the deceived desiccated lie numbly nestled A spirit stimulated by satiated slings and arrows Barely escaping the narcotized narcissistic narrows Vigilant valorous voids pleasingly passing through To help distill the poisoned biotic bacterial brew In the realms of the Nomadic turbulent tribes Stands one alone with votive vibrational vibes. June.08.2016 For Contest... DISTANT THINGS...By John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/9/2016 7:13:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, my fav. line is the last one - I wish you good luck in the contest W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Warrior Avatar
Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2016 8:02:00 AM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise...your smile alone brightens my hole day...god bless and hugs...^WW^
Date: 6/9/2016 12:58:00 AM
WELL WRITTEN...~BLESSED~..
Login to Reply
Warrior Avatar
Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2016 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Lekhika...for visiting and comment...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/8/2016 11:47:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Login to Reply
Warrior Avatar
Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Ravi...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/8/2016 11:00:00 PM
Winged, a very nice poem for the contest, I like it 7, and best of luck ~
Login to Reply
Warrior Avatar
Winged Warrior
Date: 6/9/2016 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Wings...always nice to hear from you...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/8/2016 5:45:00 PM
Wow!! Seriously deep and rhythmic. Autobiographical? Resonates w/me.
Login to Reply
Warrior Avatar
Winged Warrior
Date: 6/8/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Tom...I compare us(poets) to the nomads (poetically speaking)...stimulated by pensive pain and pleasure lol...god bless...^WW^

Book: Shattered Sighs