Nociceptive Nomad

Withering wandering waves of a wasted will
The Nomad stands in solace within the silent still
Universal laws that lock and securely seal
Metaphorical minds that soon rebelliously reveal

Lachrymal light years that have gallantly gone
Pensive prisons meticulously molding a mortal pawn
Methodical madness mocking a soulless vessel
Where the deceived desiccated lie numbly nestled

A spirit stimulated by satiated slings and arrows
Barely escaping the narcotized narcissistic narrows
Vigilant valorous voids pleasingly passing through
To help distill the poisoned biotic bacterial brew

In the realms of the Nomadic turbulent tribes
Stands one alone with votive vibrational vibes.


June.08.2016
For Contest...
DISTANT THINGS...By John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/9/2016 7:13:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, my fav. line is the last one - I wish you good luck in the contest W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:02:00 AM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise...your smile alone brightens my hole day...god bless and hugs...^WW^
Date: 6/9/2016 12:58:00 AM
WELL WRITTEN...~BLESSED~..
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Lekhika...for visiting and comment...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/8/2016 11:47:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Ravi...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/8/2016 11:00:00 PM
Winged, a very nice poem for the contest, I like it 7, and best of luck ~
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Wings...always nice to hear from you...god bless...^WW^
Date: 6/8/2016 5:45:00 PM
Wow!! Seriously deep and rhythmic. Autobiographical? Resonates w/me.
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Date: 6/8/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Tom...I compare us(poets) to the nomads (poetically speaking)...stimulated by pensive pain and pleasure lol...god bless...^WW^
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