Nobody Knows

Rancid tomato
decaying slowly.

Every ounce of me
pressed out.

Throbbing head and
aching bones.

My body crushed
under expectation.

Not knowing how long
life will sustain. 

Ruptured wounds
slowly decompose. 

Losing color from
my veins.

Nobody notices while
I’m bleeding out.

Everyone discards
rotten tomatoes.



Berteena
Harmony of the Soul

13 February, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Very deep and well written Berteena, sad plight some are in, I relate!
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:42 PM
I’m thankful my poem was well received and interpreted. I appreciate you!
Horn Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 7:50 AM
No body knows the trouble I am in except God and Jesus. Your icon for indescribable is appearing on my computer screen. Of habit, I am a creecher, That always needs another teacher and for Trump many an impeacher.
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 10:32 PM
You always make me smile. ;)
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 11:24 PM
Love the vivid imagery in your poem, Berteena. Well done. Bravo.
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Truly appreciate your thoughts. ;)
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February 13, 2019 at 11:08 PM
Whoa! I feel like I have been run over by a Mack Truck and kicked into a ditch. Thank you for reminding me I need a headache pill. I had not noticed my own fatigue and discomfort, until I had this insanely harsh wake up call. I love a poem that shows me my truth! Thank you Berteena.
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February 14, 2019 at 10:31 PM
I’m both happy & sad that you were able to connect with this poem. You get me. I like that. xoxo
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