Noah

No one believed you, when the skies were still blue. God saw the wickedness of man, God now had a plan. Noah was to build an ark, before it got dark. Animals two by two, Noah would do. The mighty rains came, the wicked were to blame. The rains stopped with a dove, let's start over with love.

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/4/2023 9:24:00 PM

Paula, I like your concise story of Noah, especially the last line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Noah write. Yes, let's start over with love. Have a great day.........

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/3/2023 3:39:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win, Paula, with this lovely poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2023 12:07:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is good to see you back. Thanks... Glad you like my write about Noah. Have a great day.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/3/2023 11:23:00 AM

"3 Place" Noah ~ Date Written:6/13/2023

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/3/2023 1:13:00 AM

"Let us start over with love" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2023 11:40:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Yes, we need to start over with love. Have a great day.........

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/3/2023 12:31:00 AM

Simple story of Noah, Paula, congratulations:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2023 11:39:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my simple Noah write. Have a great day.........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/21/2023 10:53:00 AM

Noah Date Written: 6/13/2023

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/18/2023 11:44:00 AM

It's sad that we never seem to get the message in that last line. I wonder...will we collectively ever get it? Nicely done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 10:56:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Noah write. To your question, I say no. Too much evil to have all love in the world. Heaven has the love we are looking for. Have a great day.........................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2023 8:27:00 PM

Sweet summary, Paula! ~ Bib Leo Feil

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/15/2023 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun/sweet summary Noah write. Have a great day.........................

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/13/2023 6:09:00 PM

Much said in this concise, powerful poem, Paula. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2023 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Noah write. It was fun to write. Have a great day.........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2023 2:13:00 PM

Very nicely done, Paula. We choose the same subject but your poem was way more convincing. Good luck with the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2023 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my Noah. I will check your write out. Have a great day.................