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No Wonder I Ditched the Man Child

you’re always crawling
with a fixed petulant pout
go back to mummy!

Inspired by the youtube clip of Divine

4/6/18

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/9/2018 12:54:00 PM

Aren't all men just oversized 12 year olds? but thanks for the grin!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2018 12:55:00 PM

No they are 10 not 12 lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/8/2018 4:41:00 PM

so funny!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2018 4:45:00 PM

Did you watch the video lol I just love the hook line of the song:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2018 7:00:00 PM

Interesting video , Jan. I enjoyed your little poem! Soupmail for ya.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2018 2:51:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Marc Acrich

Date: 4/6/2018 3:27:00 PM

That me but sometimes guys like this are fun not so staunch Momie she dont want me no more

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 3:30:00 PM

Thanks Marc:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/6/2018 3:17:00 PM

yeow, a mama's boy?.. lol, jan; chuckling here.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 3:26:00 PM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2018 2:30:00 PM

That was truly funny and enjoyable, Jan:) And I'm referring to both the senryu and the video (which I had never watched before). Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 2:34:00 PM

I couldn't resist either the poem or the song - the hook line of the song is so funny lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/6/2018 11:17:00 AM

This is an absolute hoot Jan, And that videos something else haha. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 11:33:00 AM

Divine was so right for him lol I couldn't resist posting the clip as i doubt many will have heard the song and I thought it was perfect to go with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 4/6/2018 11:05:00 AM

Heh heh heh ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 11:32:00 AM

thanks Mo:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2018 8:32:00 AM

Nicely done, Jan.. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 8:35:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2018 7:37:00 AM

- :))) ... thanks, I needed this right now :))) - Love the video :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 7:43:00 AM

Oh Anne-Lise, so glad you watched it, it makes me giggle as the words are so cutting lol:-) have a lovely weekend:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 4/6/2018 7:08:00 AM

Jan, that is so good on soooo many levels. And FUNNY AS HELL......

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 7:11:00 AM

I'm SO glad you commented with your approval John Lol. Did you watch the video its absolutely hilarious and the words are cutting:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/6/2018 6:54:00 AM

Lol cute one, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 6:59:00 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/6/2018 6:33:00 AM

Like the play on words! Nice one!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 6:42:00 AM

Oh i had fun with this one Kim in so many ways especially watching drag queen 'divine' lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/6/2018 6:26:00 AM

Ha...open the door and point your finger. That one is a little boy trying to be clever, but in his pouting and dribble he exposes himself as a child.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 6:29:00 AM

I think we've all met them at some time in our lives Lin, men who behave like little boys - well their mummies are welcome to them - I once had a boyfriend like this lol! :-) hugs jan xx

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