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No Wonder I Ditched the Man Child

you’re always crawling with a fixed petulant pout go back to mummy! Inspired by the youtube clip of Divine 4/6/18

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Date: 4/9/2018 12:54:00 PM
Aren't all men just oversized 12 year olds? but thanks for the grin!
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2018 12:55:00 PM
No they are 10 not 12 lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/8/2018 4:41:00 PM
so funny!!!!
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Date: 4/8/2018 4:45:00 PM
Did you watch the video lol I just love the hook line of the song:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 7:00:00 PM
Interesting video , Jan. I enjoyed your little poem! Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 4/7/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 3:27:00 PM
That me but sometimes guys like this are fun not so staunch Momie she dont want me no more
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Marc:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 3:17:00 PM
yeow, a mama's boy?.. lol, jan; chuckling here.. huggs
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 2:30:00 PM
That was truly funny and enjoyable, Jan:) And I'm referring to both the senryu and the video (which I had never watched before). Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/6/2018 2:34:00 PM
I couldn't resist either the poem or the song - the hook line of the song is so funny lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 11:17:00 AM
This is an absolute hoot Jan, And that videos something else haha. Tom
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Date: 4/6/2018 11:33:00 AM
Divine was so right for him lol I couldn't resist posting the clip as i doubt many will have heard the song and I thought it was perfect to go with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 11:05:00 AM
Heh heh heh ;)
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Date: 4/6/2018 11:32:00 AM
thanks Mo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 8:32:00 AM
Nicely done, Jan.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/6/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 7:37:00 AM
- :))) ... thanks, I needed this right now :))) - Love the video :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2018 7:43:00 AM
Oh Anne-Lise, so glad you watched it, it makes me giggle as the words are so cutting lol:-) have a lovely weekend:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 7:08:00 AM
Jan, that is so good on soooo many levels. And FUNNY AS HELL......
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Date: 4/6/2018 7:11:00 AM
I'm SO glad you commented with your approval John Lol. Did you watch the video its absolutely hilarious and the words are cutting:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 6:54:00 AM
Lol cute one, Jan.
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Date: 4/6/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 6:33:00 AM
Like the play on words! Nice one!
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Date: 4/6/2018 6:42:00 AM
Oh i had fun with this one Kim in so many ways especially watching drag queen 'divine' lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2018 6:26:00 AM
Ha...open the door and point your finger. That one is a little boy trying to be clever, but in his pouting and dribble he exposes himself as a child.
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Date: 4/6/2018 6:29:00 AM
I think we've all met them at some time in our lives Lin, men who behave like little boys - well their mummies are welcome to them - I once had a boyfriend like this lol! :-) hugs jan xx

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