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No Wonder I Ditched the Man Child

you’re always crawling
with a fixed petulant pout
go back to mummy!

Inspired by the youtube clip of Divine

4/6/18

break uphumorousrelationshipsenryu

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Michelle Faulkner

April 9, 2018 at 12:54 PM

Aren't all men just oversized 12 year olds? but thanks for the grin!

Jan Allison

April 9, 2018 at 12:55 PM

No they are 10 not 12 lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

April 8, 2018 at 4:41 PM

so funny!!!!

Jan Allison

April 8, 2018 at 4:45 PM

Did you watch the video lol I just love the hook line of the song:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 6, 2018 at 7:00 PM

Interesting video , Jan. I enjoyed your little poem! Soupmail for ya.

Jan Allison

April 7, 2018 at 2:51 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Marc Acrich

April 6, 2018 at 3:27 PM

That me but sometimes guys like this are fun not so staunch Momie she dont want me no more

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 3:30 PM

Thanks Marc:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

April 6, 2018 at 3:17 PM

yeow, a mama's boy?.. lol, jan; chuckling here.. huggs

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 3:26 PM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

April 6, 2018 at 2:30 PM

That was truly funny and enjoyable, Jan:) And I'm referring to both the senryu and the video (which I had never watched before). Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 2:34 PM

I couldn't resist either the poem or the song - the hook line of the song is so funny lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

April 6, 2018 at 11:17 AM

This is an absolute hoot Jan, And that videos something else haha. Tom

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 11:33 AM

Divine was so right for him lol I couldn't resist posting the clip as i doubt many will have heard the song and I thought it was perfect to go with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 6, 2018 at 11:05 AM

Heh heh heh ;)

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 11:32 AM

thanks Mo:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

April 6, 2018 at 8:32 AM

Nicely done, Jan.. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 8:35 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 6, 2018 at 7:37 AM

- :))) ... thanks, I needed this right now :))) - Love the video :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 7:43 AM

Oh Anne-Lise, so glad you watched it, it makes me giggle as the words are so cutting lol:-) have a lovely weekend:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

April 6, 2018 at 7:08 AM

Jan, that is so good on soooo many levels. And FUNNY AS HELL......

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 7:11 AM

I'm SO glad you commented with your approval John Lol. Did you watch the video its absolutely hilarious and the words are cutting:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

April 6, 2018 at 6:54 AM

Lol cute one, Jan.

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 6:59 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

April 6, 2018 at 6:33 AM

Like the play on words! Nice one!

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 6:42 AM

Oh i had fun with this one Kim in so many ways especially watching drag queen 'divine' lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

April 6, 2018 at 6:26 AM

Ha...open the door and point your finger. That one is a little boy trying to be clever, but in his pouting and dribble he exposes himself as a child.

Jan Allison

April 6, 2018 at 6:29 AM

I think we've all met them at some time in our lives Lin, men who behave like little boys - well their mummies are welcome to them - I once had a boyfriend like this lol! :-) hugs jan xx

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