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No Smile On Your Face

No rain, no rainbow No river, no flow No smile on your face My heart's not aglow No sun, no light No moon, dark night No gleam in your eyes This tough soldier cries No joy, no peace No hope my tears cease You've left me once more No one to care for

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 3/19/2020 5:22:00 AM

Wave her goodbye, there's plenty more . . . ; )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/19/2020 11:38:00 AM

Just like the fish in the sea, eh?! Chuckle, Gershon

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/18/2020 12:32:00 PM

I like the style of the write...Well done

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/18/2020 3:16:00 PM

Thanks Arturo. It's a bit like some of your lyrical writes. :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/17/2020 6:21:00 PM

a heartfelt write... this one is sad but well penned... good write my friend... hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/17/2020 6:56:00 PM

Right from the heart, for sure. Thanks, Sandra. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/17/2020 3:43:00 PM

Sadly I feel your angst and possibly am living it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/17/2020 5:07:00 PM

Oh, no! That's terrible. Here's to happy days. :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/16/2020 3:27:00 PM

a BEAUTIFUL REFRAIN OF LOST LOVE.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2020 7:26:00 PM

Thanks for your enthusiasm, Ralph. Appreciated. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/16/2020 2:36:00 PM

Loving you poem, Gershon. Beautiful rhythm. Well penned.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2020 7:27:00 PM

Thank you, Line. Glad you like this one. Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/16/2020 12:06:00 AM

No.. Don't cry.. Beautiful rhyme.. Whoever left, your muse didn't..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2020 7:24:00 PM

Haha... My muse … just took a cruise... Now I am writing verse in a hearse! Smiles, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/15/2020 11:00:00 PM

Your beautiful poem describes the pain of losing someone quite well, Gershon. And it has great imagery and rhyming as well! Best of wishes. :=)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2020 7:18:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, for your encouragement, Evelyn. Much appreciated. ~ Gershon