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No Santa Claus

NO SANTA CLAUS?

Brother Billy told him,
“Aint no Santa Claus”
Timmy didn’t want to believe his sibling
Just the very name of Santa was magic –
Santa Claus
Those fur-lined endings
Anta
Aus
The colorful red suit
Splendid black boots
Wide leather belt
And that snowball on top of his hat
“Delivers presents to the world?” scoffed Brother Billy
“Aint no way!”
But Timmy, at Christmas time, didn’t think with his head
Timmy thought with a child’s imagination
And the season gathered his conscious round with colors,
    music and sweetness
Mom and, especially, dad didn’t object to Billy’s scolding
“Timmy    after all    is old enough now” dad advised mom
“I’m never putting on that damn suit again!”

Timmy thought and thought 
Couldn’t sleep that Christmas Eve night for thinking
He positioned himself on the seat at the big bay window in
    his room    wrapped in a blanket    knees up to his 
    shoulders    and    watched the moon
Watched till his eyelids began to droop
No Santa
Mom found him asleep around 1:00 a.m.
She and dad had been busy wrapping presents
She    lovingly    picked him up and put him to bed with 
   Growl    his big stuffed bear

Around 2:30 a.m. – mom had been thinking and thinking
    just like Timmy – mom checked to see if dad was asleep
Then!    grabbing the jingle bells from under the tree
She climbed the stairs to Timmy’s room    opened the door
    a crack    looked around    as though anticipating escape
Then!    with a joyful smile    shook the bells vigorously!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/4/2011 5:09:00 PM
I'm still a believer. There is a spirit at Christmas that differs from any other time of year. Like in the Miracle on 34th Street. It is the intangibles that have meaning. Vince
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Date: 12/10/2010 8:10:00 AM
Good one..Imagination took off with this one..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn...Sara
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Date: 12/9/2010 10:20:00 PM
No way! I love it Daver, stopping by to say hi to one of my favorite poets here on the soup. And what to my surprise? NO SANTA! SMILES DAVER, love the ending *LOVE~SKAT
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:45:00 PM
oh, what a lovely ending to this tale. I hope she high tailed it out of there before he could see what she was up to.haha. Cute story, Daver. Glad to see you posting more. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/9/2010 12:44:00 PM
Dave thanks for this childhood reminder.. Had me smiling tonight, love Wilma
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Date: 12/8/2010 6:32:00 PM
Your narration was perfect Dave, its poetry WAS in motion ! much love, james
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Date: 12/8/2010 4:26:00 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. Bravo Bravo I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Daver. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 1:39:00 PM
I hope Billy got a lump of coal in his stocking, Daver. Shame on him for trying to spoil Timmy's Christmas! If we didn't believe, we didn't receive. That was the motto at our house. My older brother and sister never said anything to take away my love for St. Nick! A wonderful poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2010 1:36:00 PM
Nothing can erase a child's faith in Santa Claus. I still believe! This is a terrific poem and I really like the way Timmy's mom handled the situation. Good work, Daver.
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