No Roundabout- Its a Straight Road

Love is ultimate, but with you it was fatal. I had lots of laughter not until I said “I love you too!”. Number two was my certified location b’cos I’ve always reverenced you so high at the topmost of priorities. Your gladness was much more than my enjoyment, it germinated into compulsory duties I had to perform. My pride became your belt and my shame, your underpants. The definition of me translated to the adoration of you. I worry to give us a balance but you hurry to topple the equilibrium. My life, a spreadsheet of your errands, subjecting my feelings into a standby to suit your taste and exhausting comfort. But one day! The slightest of contact with an acid will change the litmus colour and a continuous debt by a tenant will abruptly render him homeless. Your oil is used up, the engine is knocked and the lamp has gone dark. A heart so tender, you deserve not. Arms once warm have been frozen to rigor motes. My back is turned towards you and that beauty, you’ll never see again. Go and taste the seedlings of the city’s daughters and the well sauced soups of its young maidens. I’m no longer yours even if nature advocates for mercy. Consider my sweetness and calm now as stones mixed in dough, baked and served with vinegar. You proclaim “I’m now a completely changed man”, I believe you, but for the next girl. Know this Mr. Irresistible guy, even if you’re the last birth of all men I’ll never again present my affections for your selfish trade. Goodbye my past lover, I sincerely wish you well.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/24/2018 7:46:00 AM
This work infuses strength, Funom...honest and forthright...
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/30/2018 1:12:00 PM
I am so lucky to have you navigate my work... Thank you so much James
Date: 6/20/2015 6:49:00 PM
Oh! your verse oozes the reasons apropo for a changed man. I love your write, jill
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Jill
Date: 6/8/2015 8:27:00 AM
"once frozen to rigor motes" ----very well coined and another favourite and well word worked line was "Go and taste the seedlings......cities daughters" which holds a lot of impact to that as well! I think this deserves a high 7! A lot of word power speaks true here. Thanks for sharing....didee
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Diane
Date: 6/8/2015 1:30:00 AM
some lines are really wow! drawing the readers eyes to read more!!!! wow!~olive eloisa
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Olive
Date: 6/7/2015 1:09:00 PM
Sounds familiar my friend, been there done that! Cool words, put together well. Thanks for your comment, Agape Moses
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much John
Date: 6/7/2015 8:15:00 AM
"Go and taste the seedlings of the city’s daughters" --- awesome.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much rob
Date: 6/7/2015 2:30:00 AM
Excellent. Passionate write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Ravi
Date: 6/5/2015 8:41:00 PM
Wow some great lines in here a fav & a 7 Light & Love Debbie
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Debbie
Date: 6/4/2015 9:30:00 PM
Funom....to mine faves! This is truly momentous! No exageration! Especially....how you leap & twist the images...."stones mixed in dough, and served with vinegar" Man! That's flavor! One of the best poems ever read here...whwn Drake Ezses returns with his "blog talk worldwide radio" please read this over the airwaves! Jimbo
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much James
Date: 6/4/2015 3:17:00 PM
Wow what a strong deep writer you are! Thank you for your comments on Silver hue! I don't come on here often but I will remember to look at your talented spread of poetry! Have a great day!!!!! :) Laura
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura
Date: 6/4/2015 3:10:00 PM
Passionate work.. Thanks for the visit to my page...The title of this work got my attention..The work itself was not what I expected so I was surprised at the content..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara
Date: 6/4/2015 11:20:00 AM
Funom, this write is full of emotions and strength, when two pieces of the puzzle do not fit nothing can change that, a7, and thanks for visiting my poem, a special gift
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Broken Wings
Date: 6/4/2015 10:02:00 AM
A different and unique way to express love gone sour...I honestly loved it...and I'm impressed......which is a compliment ...because in actuality, I am easy to please and hard to impress.....great poetry....your on my Favorite poets list now...and a BIG 7.....
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Judy
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