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No Return Strategy

It was a boomerang love affair of "once upon a midnight dreary" preponderances mid ecstasy & woe obliterating affection's sensibilities, strategic mid tomorrow's yesterdays [nectar'd apricot marmalade honey neath sizzling hot habanero spices] doused with tears betwixt fiery tumult and indescribable embraced moments clutching onto daunting fairy tales of happily afters & no return adaptations ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ of lioness queen's jungle and overbearing laughing hyenas Poe - 'one upon a midnight dreary'

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/12/2016 11:14:00 AM

after all...he's just a man

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/20/2016 7:05:00 PM

Ultra-cool poem, Paloma. I really loved the flow, the meter and the imagery paired together. A winning combo for sure. Another great poem, Lady poetess. Keep the love and knowledge flowing. Keep loving and living, sharing and giving. Ty for this treat of a sweet poem. May you live long and prosper. Much love to you.

Paloma P
Date: 10/21/2016 7:50:00 AM

Many thanks for your lustrous review, much appreciated Freddie!

Keith Logan

Date: 10/20/2016 3:56:00 AM

I give sixes where others give sevens, holding back the top rating for something really exceptional. I almost used one of those rare gifts here because this quite exceptional. I very much enjoyed the word play which hints at a barely restrained sense of humour. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:32:00 PM

'almost' made me sniggle quietly, I'll try to do better next time, thanks Keith.

White Wolf

Date: 10/19/2016 6:13:00 PM

A bit of a jin yang goin on here. Loved it Paloma, still got that dictionary by the ready! Ha.Nice write /|\

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:30:00 PM

You're a kick my friend, thanks so much Rick. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/19/2016 5:55:00 PM

That boomerang effect is felt throughout the poem, Paloma. It goes from ecstasy to woe..tomorrow's yesterdays..happiness and tears...// Impressive ending lines. I can still taste your apricot marmalade honey:) Goodnight...it's 12.55am here... paul

Paloma P
Date: 10/20/2016 4:29:00 PM

Ha hope you got a good night's sleep after all that gooey stuff Paul. :) Many thanks.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/19/2016 5:29:00 PM

I like the contrasts going on here Paloma...the dark v light, sweet v spicy...well versed

Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 6:05:00 PM

That'll teach me.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2016 5:58:00 PM

We will take him out back behind the woodshed

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 5:52:00 PM

Oh Chris is hogging your space. :) Thanks Tim, glad you enjoyed my sweet and sour mix.

Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 5:29:00 PM

Ah, maybe that's it. :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/19/2016 4:59:00 PM

I just noticed you are one of the top new poets on the site and one of the most active in reading and commenting, why is no one reading you?

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 5:21:00 PM

You're back! Sweet of you to say Chris, I think it's the excess make-up, scares people off, but it's Audrey freaking Hepburn. :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/19/2016 3:28:00 PM

"Happily afters and no return adaptations" Don't I know how this feels. Your poem is mesmerizing, if words came in colors, this would be the exit side of a prism. Wow, this was amazing.

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 3:43:00 PM

Okay, that's gotta be the coolest critique ever, 'the exit side of a prism', poetry runs through your veins. :) Many thanks Chris.