No Reservation

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No Reservation

You Are Not Invited

--Latching onto my soul without an invitation--
Elements around my shore expose more than air
--Playing with fire is not a game you will win--

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Silently she swarms in like a leech, 
Feeding and sucking from the wounds my pain left behind.
She came inside: "Uninvited!"
Here have a drink, and die!
Taste the water drips that sail across my lips 
Plodding vigorously in the open air of her unwanted hostility
Forbidden as one, I noticed her aura a sickening light
Imprisonment that haunted smoke around her own imperfections
The hate and envy, she lives in resides airborne
The sound that she have summoned up hunger  
Brought me near the edge of everything
Feel my pain, a touch of impurities    
Tainted, infected, poisoned passion, her face disguised
Surrender toward serenity, the lighthearted woman I am inside 
She will never take, my full eternal grace
It’s time to reveal that blazing fire I hide
Drown her from the false flown sorrows of gust
Hold her hideous head under water--- burn her false fire out

Never will I turn my back and watch her muster them broken lids
Lungful of lies poisons the wind that flows from her snake like voice
Maneuvering the skies, scheming that snatch in
Like a viper twisting its unmatched curves, 
I strike, like a pyromaniac  --A burning match 
Allowing her to taste a part of the air I breathe 
A waste in the breeze her insecurities 
Trying to destroy what she can't be, what she can't see
At the end, blustery weather will remind her of the sea inside me,

YOU! The Angel, who crawls around like a shadow
Gorging its way into the heart with a charm of greed
Twisting reality hoping nobody sees its true sick identity
Slandering my name as the master of evil and manipulative
Marking my territory, warning others of a cold draft
Grasping the beauty that glows from my soul 
There it stood on the ledge UNINVITED
The devil walked and took my shoes 

:)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 9/3/2014 11:08:00 PM
if i had nine less fingers i wouldn't type any slower.
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Date: 5/25/2014 11:48:00 PM
This was a very interesting read..You are a really good poet. Enjoy reading your pieces. Take care friend, Jess :)
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Date: 4/27/2014 12:52:00 AM
The devil you say! Great write, Linda. Aren't you the busy bee? Don't forget to take a break now and then, and "chill the quill," as I sometimes say. Hugs ;-)
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:56:00 PM
It is right and required sometimes to make the villain a victim PD., and no one does it better than you! Your heart should have a warning sign around it, " Be careful, this heart is avenged by Fury! " Love the match burning, and head under water... A righteous rage indeed. J.A.B.
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Date: 1/22/2014 6:17:00 PM
WOW lov ed it again my friend great job on this one, it is full of dark wonder, a powerful write. thanks for your comments. cheri
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Date: 12/31/2013 4:24:00 AM
powerful words.. immense strength in them.. esp in the second stanza.. one of my favorites now... Warm wishes for the new year
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Date: 12/16/2013 4:25:00 PM
Creative masterpiece! Filled me with awe. Great work!:) Always, Laura
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Date: 12/13/2013 9:19:00 PM
sad situation. give the poem 7.ct
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Date: 12/13/2013 7:54:00 AM
You do excellently always, God gifted. A heartfelt poem indeed. Sorry, now a days am busy, so too late. Loved always,my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 12/12/2013 6:16:00 PM
very deep and powerful Linda great work.
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Date: 12/1/2013 1:41:00 PM
Hi Linda, This poem is so deep. You drew me into your poem again. This poem to me is pure perfection. I loved reading and becoming part of it. It's so wonderful that you can write like this...Hugs....Roger
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Date: 11/28/2013 1:46:00 PM
Very emotional, what a terrible devil that was. Happy Thanksgiving PD
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Date: 11/28/2013 10:11:00 AM
A very powerful, dark write. I could almost feel the gut wrenching hate pouring out from the deep wounds. Awesome write. WISHING you and your family a very Happy Thanksgiving. love phyl
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Date: 11/27/2013 11:21:00 PM
hey P.D. I look at your picture and I decided to tell you that I am the one cooking thanksgiving dinner for tommarow. I asked my self earlier who cares. then I saw your picture. I hope that says a lot.
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:51:00 AM
One can go inside your heart through your deep and true words. It's very tough to write poems on the theme like this and need many times.Sometimes drops may drive down to write and goes the whole day in silence.Great work dear....
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:49:00 PM
Cool I'm glad you liked my poe i was beginning to worry about these three, i love poe can't you tell after my holloween write. cheri
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Date: 11/25/2013 2:18:00 PM
You continue to amaze me with your depth of insight. I anticipate your poetic imagery and your ability to use words and phrases to create wonder. Allan
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Date: 11/24/2013 1:38:00 PM
Dark, brooding, filed with pain and yet...strangely uplifting as you always are Linda. And O yea...Soup Mail!
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Date: 11/23/2013 8:23:00 AM
That is really bad for the person to walk and take your shoes..It was sad but a touch of humor there..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate all the time spent there..Is it icing where you live?..I heard on the weather channel that there was ice in some parts of Texas..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2013 9:37:00 PM
great write Linda...great metaphors....thanks for stopping by
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Date: 11/22/2013 5:03:00 PM
This reminds me of one i did a long time ago my fallen angel it is much different also than my other works, I enjoyed reading this sad and dark evil write. bravo cheri yes my i recall has a different flavor but i have a few styles
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Date: 11/21/2013 11:27:00 PM
stopping by to say hi and send a smile. Take care,Colleen
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Date: 11/21/2013 10:25:00 AM
Another intense one. Hope all is well for you.Love Colleen
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Date: 11/21/2013 2:33:00 AM
Ah... poetic licence is granted to all who write. I actually went into the latter part of last night wondering if I had been too factual in my approach to that first line. I pondered my harsh stance for some time. Then decided that I was crushing creativity. I absolutely agree with you, and will go on to try and learn from this for my own works. Did I get the back turned bit wrong as well? Sorry for all the comments below, except for the ones where I said you were awesome. Blush, blush.
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Date: 11/21/2013 1:28:00 AM
Linda, its great to be in your winners list. My poems will be there always seeking your encouragement.Always yours. (: ) Jenish.
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