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No Pressure (Reversed-Verse)

The trials ended Judges turn their once leering eyes Now, smiling at forms in the sky Surely, love shall sing of you and I As they find the reasons why No pressure… Love wont be denied o*~O~*o Love wont be denied No pressure… As they find the reasons why Surely, love shall sing of you and I Now, smiling at forms in the sky Judges turn their once leering eyes The trials ended

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Date: 7/30/2008 4:42:00 PM
This is a real interesting format that strengthens the message through your repetition. Fitting title for the piece. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/22/2008 11:05:00 AM
Love this form of poetry! Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/22/2008 10:26:00 AM
Nothing or no one can be the judge of love. Beautifully written with lovely insight in this wonderful piece, Sara:)
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