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No-One Saw the Smoke

I thought someone would see the smoke Even in the night, filled with evil Blank faces, threats, woods filled with fear Restricted by rope, gagged not to scream Ashes, ashes, life had stopped as it was Pain burned inside, surrounded by silence The fire was big enough to see from a distance But no-one saw the smoke and it raged on Where people stood without a conscience The old dirt road overgrown by years of time Leads to a story... rings of secrets left in trees Heidi Sands 6/3/18

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Date: 6/4/2018 8:54:00 AM
How interesting, Heidi, reading this as it would relate to a person. And all to often no one sees the smoke or at least pretends not to. Excellent write Happy Monday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2018 10:24:00 AM
Interesting what you have said, Mike. It was an actual experience. Thank you for your comment and support :)

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