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No More Lies

secrets h i d e senses, truth reveals broken keepsakes- I beg... no more lies. Date Written: September 5, 2016

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Skat A

Date: 9/7/2016 12:07:00 PM

Laura, I clicked on senryu and this was the title that stood out the most, so here I am checking it out. Very good, ...that's all. skat

Lu Loo
Date: 9/7/2016 1:35:00 PM

thank you SKAT- my friend just got divorced over cheating, I feel bad for her...

Paul Callus

Date: 9/6/2016 12:30:00 PM

You say such a lot in these three lines, Laura. I believe that there is nothing worse than deceitful lies. They destroy the solid basis of any relationship. ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 9/7/2016 1:35:00 PM

thank you dear Paul :)-luloo