No More


No nylon nets
on the basketball rims
No evening street lights
as the day grows dim

More bad news
when I hit the front door
More funeral flowers
for the cemetery garden dirt floor

No new neighbors
for the abandoned houses on the block
No famine on drugs
that feed the cross addicted flock

More tear trails
leading to the school courtyard
More children missing,
ghetto pain is raining down hard  

Mama says with a gentle sob,
her heart’s so sore, it can’t take no more
Papa sighs, gives her a tender embrace,
life ain’t a pretty picture when you’re colored poor

I don’t wanna see my mama crying 
no more
I don’t wanna hear my papa sighing 
no more
I don’t wanna taste my parents’ fears 
no more
To the Blessed, I have just one request ...
please give this poor teenaged soul 
a whole lot less grief and stress
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 6/9/2017 9:10:00 PM
Sadly so very true. If allowed, this would be rated a 10 for me. Keep well, Mikki
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 6/10/2017 10:05:00 AM
Ty, Mikki. I think on the grief of the Nigerian parents whose school girls were stolen by the terrorist group Boko Haram. Tragic. I appreciate your kind comments. Love always.
Date: 6/9/2017 8:58:00 AM
A sad write that I could read over and over. The heartbreak, despondency, grief of it all and from different perspectives. I know of a few that drugs has hit hard. My son-in-law's friend (they were in a band together) died from heroin use. He had a child around the age of my grandson. I remember him, his wife and the baby celebrating with us my grand's first birthday. He lost it all! Bles you, Freddie.
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Date: 6/9/2017 8:11:00 AM
So heartbroking, and no words can ease their pain. Great poem Freddie... hugs :)
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Date: 6/9/2017 7:54:00 AM
Well written Freddie! So sad and shows so much truth to what people can feel. Life can certainly be hard. I like the ending.
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Date: 6/9/2017 7:36:00 AM
Well done, Freddie. Life is hard, is it not? Very emotive write.
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