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No Mistakes In Our Universe - Monoku2

I Human, all nature's events, are without mistakes - but for ego. II Burls in trees, bugs among crops, seek balance. Except us humans.

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Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/12/2022 10:21:00 AM

but for ego. Except us humans. - vices nicely pointed out in two intelligent Monoku! - Thanks, Marshall

Anil Deo
Date: 1/12/2022 11:45:00 AM

It is a blessing to be understood; all of Nature except humans do accept they are food for some species, enjoy symbiosis with others. We just want Nature to assume all casualties. Thanx, shalom & salaam, Marshall

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/9/2022 12:00:00 PM

Anil, you've written a fantastic monoku. In fact, there is nothing in the cosmos that is the result of chance.

Anil Deo
Date: 1/9/2022 5:38:00 PM

Ameen