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No Mask On Knees

Where the clouds Through with hidden beams Bow slightly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 11/17/2024 12:05:00 PM
I like your metaphor but not sure on the title. I thought it might be a joke about mask mandates when I saw it! It is hard for me to find things if yours I have not seen. Let me look for at least one more
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Paige Hind
Date: 11/17/2024 12:17:00 PM
The clouds bowing slightly with sun coming through- no mask can hide the light and how it shines on us. That's what I mean. <3 :)
Date: 7/21/2024 10:49:00 PM
Interesting lines penned. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:22:00 PM
How intuitive of you Page..' I can't speak for Others? But I find them superflous for knees Which often now seize..' Still I shall not bore You further.' Enjoyed the write.!
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Date: 7/16/2024 4:42:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 7/16/2024 12:31:00 AM
Fascinating form ffor a ku…do not know this form of s haiku. Hoge to ypu.
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Date: 7/13/2024 9:38:00 AM
Lovely imagery of the clouds parting, well done~
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Date: 7/10/2024 1:03:00 AM
A very interesting haiku. Well done.
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Date: 7/9/2024 6:11:00 PM
This has a great metaphor.
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