No Marriage

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" Well at least he had the balls to ask her :) " ~ by poet~

A nice man was Ben Tickle. He loved to eat a pickle. He proposed. Tess was fickle. Can’t be TessTickle!

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Christina Bowring

Date: 3/26/2024 4:16:00 PM

I thought I would visit some older poems now dear Wen. This is naughty but very, very funny and I got the joke first time! Your quote sums it all up nicely. Really made me laugh at the end of a hard, working day. Thank you, sweet one xx

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/26/2024 4:29:00 PM

It's Cute isn't it ? you are one of the very few that got it first off. Some need tit explained which really takes the fun out of it.. Thanks Chris. .. Wen

Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/26/2024 4:27:00 PM

Thanks Kim

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 3:19:00 AM

Ah dear SV! I enjoyed reading this dodoitsu! So well written and presented too! Haha that quote is so funny! And it took me like three reads to get the last line! I must admit i am always slow in understanding the depth of jokes haha! But once i did i couldnt stop laughing! And that picture goes so well too with this! I love those rhyme’s queen! Every line flows with another and ensured that you delivered a fantastic and creative piece! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning! A fave

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/21/2023 8:16:00 PM

Your Dodoitsu is hilarious, SV. Your attention to detail shines through in every line, and your ability to capture the form so well makes me smile. I admire the protagonist for having the courage to approach someone so defenseless and ask her out...:)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 10/21/2023 9:59:00 PM

Oh dear friend, I went out on a limb to post this. I am not usually "naughty", but when I saw the contest I figured it was time that Tess took it public, no matter how much she loved him, she refused to become Testicle. !!!! Thanks for your comment. Best wishes. SV