No Man's Islands

Like cold marble statues
stiff as vague mixtures
of alcohol that stings of spirits,
cheap as famished souls.
Once were unique and proud,
now the vanishing isles!

A struggle to keep adrift 
to face the blue sky vast
and unyielding, matching 
that deep Pacific Ocean.
Hear us now gagging on
driftwood and rising waters.

Peaceful seas of dreams
where dancing bonitos circle
canoes,surfing freely cruising
with yellow fins in oceans of fun.
Now hear chokes of sinking feelings
and sirens lamenting restless souls.

As sea sprays watered eyes in contrition 
someone changed the climate in Iceland 
and desert storms rampaged our islands.
Rumblings of constipated volcanoes
longing for release but now stifled by
solar shields torn by man's greed.

As I float amongst the beaches of ghostly
Polynesian islands, the reefs cry out in 
protest as  navigation comes full circle,
back to 'hawaiki' our 'once was seen'
home of origin, a failed quest reiterating
the original theme of a people that "once 
upon a time" existed now once again 
A no man's islands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/6/2025 5:45:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 8/4/2016 8:44:00 PM
Intense write indeed this is....enjoyed every line...where are you?
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Date: 1/18/2016 1:44:00 PM
Tiaua, Awesome write, Thank You for sharing... SKAT...
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:44:00 PM
A very powerful poem.
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Date: 9/29/2014 2:37:00 AM
heart touching very beautifully drawn picture excellent piece
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 10/28/2014 5:37:00 AM
Dear Liam, sorry for the lateness of this acknowledgement, I just appreciate your comments. Thanks for the visit, alofas, Tiaua
Date: 9/25/2014 5:17:00 AM
you make me feel I am there seeing all of this ,
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 10/28/2014 5:33:00 AM
Hi Cynthia, sorry I had not been on PS for sometimes hence the belated thank you, glad you understand our position in the small islands. We however trust in God. Alofas to you dear friend. Tiaua.
Date: 9/13/2014 6:21:00 AM
I feel the agony and bitterness of your beautiful and full of messages writing dear, Tiaua and my heart goes out to you! Thank you for sharing!
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Tiaua M Ioane
Date: 9/18/2014 11:37:00 PM
Dearest friend, thanks for understanding our small islands plight, am currently faced with so many issues that poetry seems to be the welcomed haven for release. Always grateful for taking your precious time to read and comment on my pieces. Thanks for being a friend. Lots of Alofas from my small Samoa. Tiaua
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