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No Longer Guilty

Drained from Friday’s grind, the cab halted quite late When a stranger begged to take my place instead, In my coarse language, I ignored his appeal Till the man spoke of an offer in Café Bread. As grey sunset drowned against a city’s face I owned up , knowing now of his long job-quest, That I dropped him in time, in a new workplace My day ending well… a stranger’s night, the best. 3/14/2016

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:26:00 AM
A delightful story well developed for the contest dear nette! Goof luck!
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Date: 3/13/2016 4:50:00 PM
sweet thoughtful write, my friend x
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Date: 3/13/2016 2:15:00 PM
..... a happy ending .... :) - A great poem, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/13/2016 2:13:00 PM
Sometimes we react furiously without seeing the big picture. Brilliant composition!
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Date: 3/13/2016 2:04:00 PM
Indeed, a feel-good way to make amends. You painted a scene which implies the awakened sense of man. Simply magnificent!
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Date: 3/13/2016 1:58:00 PM
Great write, Daniel said it all no regrets good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 3/13/2016 12:56:00 PM
Spontaneous and exciting. No regrets! Fun read, nette. Peace my dear:)
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